Random talk, i'm kind new on this forum XD

[DarkSkittles]

I'm just going to ramble a bit, but anyone who wants a conversation, plz join. I am in school, but I'm in ISI, a new version of ISS. So I got bored a while ago while just looking at a blank screen, I thought of Graal Era, so I wrote it into a story. So far, even my ISI teacher says it looks good, he never complements my work, but if any one wants to see it, say that you do.

[MikeyUK]

Wot?

[Grief Hero]

I'd love to read your story :]

[DarkSkittles]

I have made multiple accounts, but i'm thinking of just sticking with this on for some time XD I never understood this whole relationship thing on video games, i mean you cant do anything, unless you meet them in real life, i mean stuff like teenagers an adults do, I'm only saying this just in case there is a freakin kid that joins this chat >

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lol ok, hold a bit

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Graal Era

There was a city of violence called Graal. It was made long ago in its “classic” days, but, it’s been reformed by the new times, Era. The story takes place on a stormy Wednesday night…

I heard gun fire, turrent fire, cannon fire, I thought I was still asleep when the left engine on air class. B22 exploded. I opened my eyes to see that the plane was going down. “Brace for impact, we are going down, I repeat, we are going down!” Those words were said by the pilot, but as soon as I reacted, the plane crash lands. The left secondary engine fell off, and turned into a cloud of fire and metal behind us. Then the right engine malfunctioned, I knew, it was making rattling and clanging sounds, but, every one else didn’t seem to notice. The plane veered left and right till it came to a stop. The pilots started to evacuate the plane before who or what shot us down, arrived to finish the job. I looked at one of the pilots while saying “What happened, what shot us down?” “I don’t know sir, but we wont be safe for long I advise we…” the right engine fell apart and the blade struck through the pilot’s body. I jumped out the window and ran the other direction, ironically the “safe” route was sabotaged, while I ran the other way. Unknown to me, I ran straight into a police car, which hit me at 65 mph.

I wake up to see that I’m in a hospital bed, but, I was still in my clothes. I sat up to realize that there was dried blood all over my jacket, I know it wasn’t mine, and then I remembered the pilot that died. I shivered. I got up out of the bed to leave the room. As I reached for the handle, I heard someone shout “Fight me you noob, or do you not have that revive potion you said you had?!” I opened the door to a crack, so I can look towards them. There was a man with grey hair holding, what looked like a giant hammer. The one that was yelling was a … a pink bear, like a pink teddy bear, holding a .50 caliber machine gun. Am I still dreaming, or is there a pink living teddy bear that’s about 5’4, carrying a war turrent, and is very, very angry. The grey haired man was reaching for his hammer, when the intercom said “all fighting must be outside, in the non-safe zone.” They grunted and left to go fight else were. What I didn’t know was that, to my surprise, a nurse opened my door, making me fall to the floor. I got up, the nurse gasped, she looked terrified, “I-I am so sorry sir, please, you shouldn’t be moving yet…” but I didn’t listen, I said instead “I was attacked when my plane was coming to land in this town, I’m definitely not going to lay around for them to find me and finish me.” I grabbed a robe, like a monks, and changed my jacket into it. A good disguise really, it even had a hood that hid my face completely.

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thats all i have at this tim sorry

[Grief Hero]

Good story line =) but could do with a tiny bit of editing, would you like me to edit a little while later?

[DarkSkittles]

lol, when i'm finished sure, i'm on a old computer at school