Quote Originally Posted by Elfren Eve View Post
So here are the fixes.


I'm not a big fan of complex/messy art.
Although some cases I do prefer it since its easier.
The theme of this drawing is supposed to be, cartoon-like.
You can actually feel the emotions of this character, (Happiness, Care-free, Over joyed, etc.).
I really loved how you put on a splash of blue on white to make the background more interesting.
This artwork was just a matter of few small fixes.
I fixed the outlines of the hair, to make it seem cleaner. I also recolored how the light source appeared on the head. In more of a defined triangular shape.
I made some changes to the hair to make it seem more natural.
I re-shaded few parts of the face.
Lastly, I changed the shirt to show parts of the chest to make it seem more natural.
Other than that, its an outstanding piece of work. Looking forward to more of your work!
neat! Thanks a bunch for the tips, Elfren