BaileyVandenbroek New levels Thread^^!

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some are older and the mistakes have been fixed example the huge lobby is an outdated picture ;)

Feedback please comments are accepted .

My MasterPiece.. https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachmen...iivillaone.PNG

I mean they look pretty good I guess but the first one has way too much windows imo.

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Originally Posted by JungleJimmy

I mean they look pretty good I guess but the first one has way too much windows imo.

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Well xd it's a Skyscraper Lobby so it is abit normal haha !

thx you^^!

Did you just make the Trump Tower?

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Originally Posted by Kendrick

Did you just make the Trump Tower?

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But he is my idol :D

The second, sixth and eighth levels appeal to me.
I have zero clue what is going on in the other levels.

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Originally Posted by Bulletzone

The second, sixth and eighth levels appeal to me.
I have zero clue what is going on in the other levels.

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Try explaining by circling what and how you got no clue of what is going on @bulletzone thx ;)

To start off, I have no clue what the theme is on the server you are on, So I'm rating this based on How the tiles are used (Especially in iEra/Era).

http://i.imgur.com/9m7rSjv.png

The top of the windows (shown in Green), are just so confusing in my opinion. This seems to be your style which is nice, however I just feel like your execution is incorrect.
You need to take things slow and not make it look like there's too much going on.

The parts in brown/red signify that you need to link the Lining borders together.

The parts in yellow indicate the execution is wrong. Notice how you take the wall back one, yet you don't do the same to the border.

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http://i.imgur.com/d8aK0IZ.png

This level is literally a flat house.

The reason is, you've added no tiles to represent the roof slanting down (on the backside). I've indicated where you need to add the tiles.
Also link some of the adjacent roofs together. The level walls seem very repetitive. Variate your design a little.

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Originally Posted by Bulletzone

To start off, I have no clue what the theme is on the server you are on, So I'm rating this based on How the tiles are used (Especially in iEra/Era).

http://i.imgur.com/9m7rSjv.png

The top of the windows (shown in Green), are just so confusing in my opinion. This seems to be your style which is nice, however I just feel like your execution is incorrect.
You need to take things slow and not make it look like there's too much going on.

The parts in brown/red signify that you need to link the Lining borders together.

The parts in yellow indicate the execution is wrong. Notice how you take the wall back one, yet you don't do the same to the border.

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http://i.imgur.com/d8aK0IZ.png

This level is literally a flat house.

The reason is, you've added no tiles to represent the roof slanting down (on the backside). I've indicated where you need to add the tiles.
Also link some of the adjacent roofs together. The level walls seem very repetitive. Variate your design a little.

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WTF!

@Mods

Bulletzone just draw a "Men's body part" on the first image!

Bulletzone for fire! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Originally Posted by Bulletzone

To start off, I have no clue what the theme is on the server you are on, So I'm rating this based on How the tiles are used (Especially in iEra/Era).

http://i.imgur.com/9m7rSjv.png

The top of the windows (shown in Green), are just so confusing in my opinion. This seems to be your style which is nice, however I just feel like your execution is incorrect.
You need to take things slow and not make it look like there's too much going on.

The parts in brown/red signify that you need to link the Lining borders together.

The parts in yellow indicate the execution is wrong. Notice how you take the wall back one, yet you don't do the same to the border.

- - - Updated - - -

http://i.imgur.com/d8aK0IZ.png

This level is literally a flat house.

The reason is, you've added no tiles to represent the roof slanting down (on the backside). I've indicated where you need to add the tiles.
Also link some of the adjacent roofs together. The level walls seem very repetitive. Variate your design a little.

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Great advices thx^^! for the interior lobby all errors you shown me are fixed like I told the level is an old picture but for the circled red you are right!