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Hi,Im Troy ive been leveling for 1 month so i decided to post my levels here!and also im an Lat on an server named Quebecois1996 Im still kinda a noob so i wanted you guys to feedback about my levels
here are few of my levels:
House
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Road
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I will be posting more soon!
(Attached Thumbnails Was the old ones :))
Hi Troy, your levels look amazing for only 1 month experience. Only a couple minor mistakes that will be very easy to notice and patch up other than that great work bud
Thank you! about the mistakes elaborate please? I'd like to fix them
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I found the mistake
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Is it right? Let me know if there is still mistakes! Thanks for the feedback:)
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Originally Posted by troygraal
That looks so much better now.
Also, for the little building on the roof, the heights of the walls are not the same, so they shouldn't connect like that - that's what I think at least
Other than that, good work
Thank you!Quote:
Originally Posted by kaku
I've fixed the heights (Updated)
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Good now? Thanks for the feedback! :)
https://i.imgur.com/E7O2evG.pngQuote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
-https://www.era-go.com/forum/member.php?14336-Josh-Graal
very nice.
Woahhhhh looks amazing. GOODJOB!
Cute! :) maybe make the bottom windows bigger though? :eek:
https://i.imgur.com/NKeCYm3.jpg
There should be 'shading' here. due to the sun light.
The door needs an outline.
The windows need an outline, so it makes the windows pop.
You don't need to 'outline' there due to the fact of the bush being there.
The roof needs outline for the sunlight
Otherwise things look good.
Good job. The graphics are amazing!:D
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Thank you! Ill try to fix those soon! Thank you for detailing all of them!,Thank you for the feedback!Quote:
Originally Posted by N!chola$
Thank you! :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Sam Winchester
Its been a long time since ive posted my last lat work...So now ive maked just 1 inside unstick me level What you guys think? Leave a feedback!:D
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A little empty, with strange wall angles...Quote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
Nice keep up the good work :)
Hello And Im Back :o
Since my thread just hitted 1k views
I just wanted to share one of my levels that i have passed to the level application
I hope you guys will like it! Leave a feedback on my levels :)
(Some npc images doesnt work, Thats why i have to deal with npc images that work)
https://i.imgur.com/5FFOkZq.png
https://i.imgur.com/l3X4skV.png
Used imgur due to my picture being 110.9kb bytes
looks really good :)
Ik I'm kinda late but, d you still want feedback. The road seems kinda smallQuote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
Nice, I can really see the improvement, just 1 small thing that annoyed me is the colors of the floor tiles, it would look more appealing to the eyes if the colors are symmetrical meaning that the bottom room should have grey on the side and blue in the center. same situation for the floor tiles on the top room.Quote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
Thank you :DQuote:
Originally Posted by N!chola$
Yes, your pretty late. That level was really old. I agree that the roads are kinda small thanks for the feedback tho :)Quote:
Originally Posted by AliGamer911
Thank you, I would make the floor tiles more appealing in my future levels. Thank you for the feedback :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Joeyaudi1
Very cool.
Thank you :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Jp
Hello, Im Back from Levels!
I thought this thread would not be able make it to 2k but it did!
I wanted to share my Levels that I've made recently.
Leave a feedback on my levels so I could more improve it the future. ;)
Again, there's been trouble on uploading images on the forums so I had to upload it on Imgur.
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I'd move that brown thing above the stairs down a tile or two, shade the little table next to the stairs, should change the counter to one table type, maybe add some sand in the windows, center your npc at the top of level to the middle of the wall (using the -x script I believe), add a few different npc picture images for the pictures in the frames on the walls, I'd also move that yellow flower framed picture to the left a bit (near the top right of the level to match it with the otherside. Otherwise, it looks pretty good! You did really good!
Thank you for your feedback!Quote:
Originally Posted by kaz210
I've changed it, How does it look now?
I'm still finding out how to make the npc go in the middle of the wall.
I'm confused on the yellow flower framed picture you said, Sorry Haha.
Unfortunately the npc picture images only have 4 so I had to deal with repeating them.:(
Thank you!:o
Looks a lot better! If you'd like: message me on disc. My disc is (removed cus random ppl addin me) and I could send you the script to move the npc half a tile over. As for the for the yellow flower framed pic, I believe the script will help with that.Quote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
Thank you, Troy! Very cool!
Updated. Now the npc is in the middle of the wall
I guess the flower framed picture helped aswell?
Thank you :DQuote:
Originally Posted by AliGamer911
Looks g, sorry I forgot I was going to send you the script but im glad ya got it. Anyways, should still fix that table and make it one typeQuote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
Fixed.Quote:
Originally Posted by kaz210
Tell me if there are still problems!
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I've made this levels because I was so bored and has nothing to do.
Leave a feedback so I could more improve in the future!
Outside Levels
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Inside Levels!
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pretty nice! some feedback tho :)
outside:
-the hanging bed on the window was very weird imo but i understand what u were trying to do!
-the deep water patches were very blocky, try to give details to the edges. same with the gray road entrance :D
-the orange trees on the third pic were really mismatched to the grass and some of the were one layer above the things they shouldnt be
inside:
-some items were too close to the end lining of the wall, try leaving a small gap between the wall to make it look like it's not getting out of the level
- the spacing of some chairs near the table needs a bit more work! try studying some of the tables and chairs in graal :)
other than that everything looks great! especially the inside levels :D
Thank you for the feedback!Quote:
Originally Posted by Minho
-Im sure that's not an hanging bed, It's an rope display.
- Fixed the blocky water patches!
-Unfortunately I can't edit the 3rd image, But I agree with the mistakes from that old level.
-Fixed! Added a small gap on the walls.
-Does the chairs looks better?
Thank you! :D
Yup! looks better :D very professional!Quote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
Thank you! :oQuote:
Originally Posted by Minho
Make a level of a tax center
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Hello Everyone! I'm once again back on Leveling!:rolleyes:
Thank you for 7k Views on my Thread! :o I didn't expect my thread to have that alot of views!
So what I have here is a Task Room level. I tried on doing large levels and some designings on the floor.
I hope you all like it! Any feedbacks are welcome :D
(Expect more levels in the future ;))
Task Room
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This is really nice! I can see that you improved a lot based on your first levels! Good job.Quote:
Originally Posted by troygraal
I would suggest widening the entrance like 2 extra tiles and maybe use another color for the border, but thats just some minor stuff because im picky lol
Thank you! :DQuote:
Originally Posted by GeorgeZ
Thank you for your feedback! :)
I'll be sure to change those entrance later on (Updated the Entrance! :)) might change the colors of the borders on my other Levels but for this Level I think I'll leave it there. Thanks for the suggestion tho!
New Level! :rolleyes:
I haven't tried to make a Spar Room Level before so I created one! I did like half autumn/greenish theme on this Level.
Let me know your feedback on my recent Level! :)
Spar Room
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