Josh Graal's Level Thread

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Originally Posted by Josh Graal

Thanks lads :p

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An outside house template! :D
http://i.imgur.com/TcT3bhD.png

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The stairs towards the right leading up, sorta spoil that area and where's the railing for the front of the porch over the water?
(Probably doesn't make sense).
Very Amazing level though, Definetly a 10/10.

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Originally Posted by Trav

Eye candy

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Originally Posted by yaboilexon

i love them, great work man!
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Thanks!^^

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Originally Posted by Bulletzone

The stairs towards the right leading up, sorta spoil that area and where's the railing for the front of the porch over the water?
(Probably doesn't make sense).
Very Amazing level though, Definetly a 10/10.

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Thanks Bullet! I completely agree with you about the stair towards the right. There's also no railing around the porch because it's designed to be a jetty, hence the stair acts as sort of a ledge. :D

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Originally Posted by Josh Graal

A Gun Shop
http://i.imgur.com/u68KVnd.png
http://i.imgur.com/BHhpMQf.png

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Looks amazing! The floor is pretty great! I love the style.

Amazing work Josh!

Nice gun shop. Exterior looks nice but a bit too small, sorry :L

Good job, you have made a good design, congratulations, keep up the good work. :)

Your levels are quite boring and repetitive in my opinion. Most of your inside levels use the same sort of concave structure every. single. time. Try not to overuse patterns inside as well as outside as eventually it just looks like you have no creativity,

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Originally Posted by Josh Graal

A Gun Shop
http://i.imgur.com/u68KVnd.png
http://i.imgur.com/BHhpMQf.png

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Given the look of it, you clearly made an imbalance level.

The exterior has the door in the middle. However, the interior has it in the right. How does that occur? Logically speaking, the windows and doors from outside must match as the interior. Something you did not do. Windows let light inside, correct? Why is there no light? Those are some of the points made.

One other mistake in the window that you have in the middle of your interior level. I simply don't understand what is behind the wall. Just take them off.. It doesn't make sense at all.

The walls are repetitive but I understand why, it is pattern.

Needs work and where's the light? Is the room lit by just the plain windows? Is this Hot Topic?

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Originally Posted by LebJoe

Looks amazing! The floor is pretty great! I love the style.

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Yeah, I've been meaning to try that style of flooring for awhile now. Glad you like it :)

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Originally Posted by Power5327

Amazing work Josh!

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Originally Posted by Dean Winchester

Good job, you have made a good design, congratulations, keep up the good work. :)

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Thank you!

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Originally Posted by gabipants 2

Nice gun shop. Exterior looks nice but a bit too small, sorry :L

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Thanks. The objective for the outside level was to create an exterior that would fit in around the same space as FortKnox, hence the size ;)

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Originally Posted by Sky

Your levels are quite boring and repetitive in my opinion. Most of your inside levels use the same sort of concave structure every. single. time. Try not to overuse patterns inside as well as outside as eventually it just looks like you have no creativity,

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Although I wouldn't call my levels boring, I do see what you mean as far as the same concave structure goes. Thanks for the CC!

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Originally Posted by Kendrick

Given the look of it, you clearly made an imbalance level.

The exterior has the door in the middle. However, the interior has it in the right. How does that occur? Logically speaking, the windows and doors from outside must match as the interior. Something you did not do. Windows let light inside, correct? Why is there no light? Those are some of the points made.

One other mistake in the window that you have in the middle of your interior level. I simply don't understand what is behind the wall. Just take them off.. It doesn't make sense at all.

The walls are repetitive but I understand why, it is pattern.

Needs work and where's the light? Is the room lit by just the plain windows? Is this Hot Topic?

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I really appreciate what you said about the light coming from the windows, I've recently tried this on a project I'm working on for a server and It makes such a difference, in my opinion.. Thanks Kendrick!

Staff House for Venlith (Not yet fully finished, will update/add pictures as it progresses)
http://i.imgur.com/W4tVaxq.png
http://i.imgur.com/gms6CQw.png
http://i.imgur.com/iV1kfky.png
http://i.imgur.com/PFzPZl4.jpg