I think you should try and add a little bit of shape to it, not so much of a boxQuote:
Originally Posted by WreX
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I think you should try and add a little bit of shape to it, not so much of a boxQuote:
Originally Posted by WreX
Looks like an actual bambooQuote:
Originally Posted by WreX
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10/10
Beginning something new has its mistakes, more than a professional or someone who's familiar with the subject, which in this is case it's pixel art.Quote:
Originally Posted by yaboilexon
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Not bad, but the perspective is off. The top of the bamboo is visible, and that's good that you added that there. However, the bottom is NOT visible to the naked eye (due to the top view), therefore your mistake is on the bottom. Remove that yellow part on the bamboo, make it round under there and I'll give it a "i like it" comment.Quote:
Originally Posted by WreX
Youre missing the point, i understand what a beginner means, the point is when someone gives you feedback on what's wrong, you shouldn't just say "well im a beginner so it can be bad and i dont have to change anything" youre taking it completely out of context. If someone makes something and says theyre a beginner and it wont be great, thats fine, but its when you give someone feedback and they say that.Quote:
Originally Posted by ItzTerry
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thanks for all the tips everyone i will do it after school @kendrick cuz im too tierd now hehe and @nite the knight u did make new things like this bamboo and other hats also i make masks only when i have rly good idea for one
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https://i.imgur.com/Ui1cg7F.png there fixed
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thanksQuote:
Originally Posted by Froz
Eh, your gun won because I liked the shape foundation of it, and did a small edit on it so it would be presentable. Rec was against it winning at all before the edit.Quote:
Originally Posted by yaboilexon
So maybe not the best example to give
The criticism i was giving him was about the shape so i think it works perfectly lolQuote:
Originally Posted by BiTzSam
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It's not about your critique it's about what you said of him being a beginner not a good enough excuse of not having perfection.Quote:
Originally Posted by yaboilexon
Everybody starts somewhere, nobodies first attempts are that amazing. For his first gun sure it might not look great, but that's because it's his/one of his first attempts. He has at least got decent sizing proportions for a player which is something not everyone gets right and he didn't do an edit. And might I add without the use of the gun competition template that had the sizing reference already set out which you had the luxury of when being a beginner
I even asked him if he wanted me to be blunt or not, he didnt answer so i went with the blunt route. And everyone is missing the point of what i said. i never said it has to be perfect but dont use being a beginner as an excuse to why you wont change things on your graphics. i see it all the time, i tell someone whats wrong, and how to change it and they reply "well its my first gun so im kind of a beginner". like ok? that doesnt change the fact that i told you how you can fix it. And after they say that they dont make any effort to fix whats wrong.Quote:
Originally Posted by BiTzSam
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And hell,my first attempt wasnt good by all means, but i didnt just say"well im a beginner" and give up, i kept working on it until i felt it was the best i could do.
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