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11-24-2015, 11:19 PM
Bone

http://images.tapatalk-cdn.com/15/11...af16550949.jpg should I abort or keep going?
11-24-2015, 11:33 PM
Mystic Everwhist

http://images.tapatalk-cdn.com/15/11...a269697ecc.jpg

Shading is my #1 problem... Ik the hat looks horrible right now but ill try to improve, any suggestions?
11-25-2015, 12:48 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bone

http://images.tapatalk-cdn.com/15/11...af16550949.jpg should I abort or keep going?

Flying ribbon? What? Try to make the ribbon bigger.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Mystic Everwhist

http://images.tapatalk-cdn.com/15/11...a269697ecc.jpg

Shading is my #1 problem... Ik the hat looks horrible right now but ill try to improve, any suggestions?

Outline and use a darker green.
11-25-2015, 01:21 AM
Enfy

http://imgur.com/a/PkqhQ

The last one was a w.i.p from last year, I just noticed all the jagged lines after I finished shading.
Hm, i'm looking for really strong CC

I'm rusty but hopefully i'll get used to making art again in a week or so.
11-25-2015, 01:28 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by AceLion

http://imgur.com/a/PkqhQ

The last one was a w.i.p from last year, I just noticed all the jagged lines after I finished shading.
Hm, i'm looking for really strong CC

I'm rusty but hopefully i'll get used to making art again in a week or so.

You're rusty? Nah bruh, you are doing great!

Fix the eyes, they are too blocky. Make them a little bigger so you can add some AA to make it round. The horns are too straight, try to make it more curved.
On the penguin, make the beak a little darker, but it looks great!
The last beanie needs some work. Fix the jaggy line on the side views and smoothen out the shades. Put it transparent, but if not, put some glare on the shades!
Other than that, good job!! =]
11-25-2015, 01:32 AM
PinkyGraal

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Attachment 25550

Ornament dagger update
11-25-2015, 02:29 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by PinkyGraal

Attachment 25550

Ornament dagger update

Aye! Good job so far! Great thing I am on PC.
So, you made the ornament too bright that you can't even see the shading.

Clear all, use a template if you need, but not colors that are really close enough. After that, use a color to select the whole ornament.
Click me.

After that, make some circles inside the ornament. Let's focus on the sphere. I've noticed your circle was not symmetrical at all.
So here is what it should look like.
Right here.

Now do the spheres inside!!
Grab an ornament and look at its shading, but I used my head for this.
Hi.

Now do AA, I have done, but do some more if possible.
To this, but I might be wrong? ?_?
HIHIH.

Last but not least, put the hanger. I'll let you do that. ;p

Goodluck!!
File.
11-25-2015, 02:54 AM
PinkyGraal

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

Aye! Good job so far! Great thing I am on PC.
So, you made the ornament too bright that you can't even see the shading.

Clear all, use a template if you need, but not colors that are really close enough. After that, use a color to select the whole ornament.
Click me.

After that, make some circles inside the ornament. Let's focus on the sphere. I've noticed your circle was not symmetrical at all.
So here is what it should look like.
Right here.

Now do the spheres inside!!
Grab an ornament and look at its shading, but I used my head for this.
Hi.

Now do AA, I have done, but do some more if possible.
To this, but I might be wrong? ?_?
HIHIH.

Last but not least, put the hanger. I'll let you do that. ;p

Goodluck!!
File.

Thanks :)
11-25-2015, 04:14 AM
Zenfero01

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

gimp.

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What's that awful smell? Oh yeah! I smell pillow shading! Oh my gosh.
Follow chicken advice on the shading. Also, add some texture on the white, that's fur, not a smooth surface.. Chickennnnn

why did you tell chicken..?[emoji23] im the one who remade it..chicken is just helping me with pillow shading..and for your information i don't really know how to make fury texture.im still a beginner
11-25-2015, 04:18 AM
MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/mscTGLw.png?1
Thoughts?
11-25-2015, 04:20 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/mscTGLw.png?1
Thoughts?

How many times do i have to say? Outline. Outline. Outline.
11-25-2015, 04:23 AM
MarkGraal

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

How many times do i have to say? Outline. Outline. Outline.

Outline the hat? 0.0
11-25-2015, 04:33 AM
Zenfero01

Quote:

Originally Posted by AceLion

http://imgur.com/a/PkqhQ

The last one was a w.i.p from last year, I just noticed all the jagged lines after I finished shading.
Hm, i'm looking for really strong CC

I'm rusty but hopefully i'll get used to making art again in a week or so.

I like the 3rd one.. both 1st & 2nd hats need more texture
11-25-2015, 04:33 AM
Chickenpotpie

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

Outline the hat? 0.0

outline w/ black that is not black pls

and o yeah the brown strips r pillow shaded, so is red brim kinda.
11-25-2015, 04:39 AM
MarkGraal

The brown stripes I'll have to fix. I don't think the red brim is pillow shaded. there is a logical definite lightsource, no light between viewer and object.
11-25-2015, 04:44 AM
Chickenpotpie

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

The brown stripes I'll have to fix. I don't think the red brim is pillow shaded. there is a logical definite lightsource, no light between viewer and object.

The brim doesn't follow the light source though.
For the green part of the hat, light is hitting from the top diagonally, whereas the red brim the light is hitting it directly from the side, not from the top diagonally.

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o yeah and don't use so many shades lel.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

Pillow shaded. :[

I still remember those days Kenny frowned upon my shading.
Isn't that right bud? ;o
11-25-2015, 04:44 AM
Enfy

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zenfero01

I like the 3rd one.. both 1st & 2nd hats need more texture

You're right.
11-25-2015, 04:46 AM
MarkGraal

I tried to add depth but the top shading of the brim comes to far right. I used a lot of shades to make the hat not as flat. since there isn't a whole lot of contrast between each color, I think it looks fine :0
11-25-2015, 04:48 AM
Chickenpotpie

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

I tried to add depth but the top shading of the brim comes to far right. I used a lot of shades to make the hat not as flat. since there isn't a whole lot of contrast between each color, I think it looks fine :0

I shall supply u with a quick edit!
If you post the non zoomed file that is.
11-25-2015, 04:56 AM
MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/InWmHcX.png?1
Blue part is the edited area only. Heres the file.
http://i.imgur.com/fi7nTRP.png?1
11-25-2015, 05:01 AM
Zenfero01

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/InWmHcX.png?1
Blue part is the edited area only. Heres the file.
http://i.imgur.com/fi7nTRP.png?1

how about the deer horn? i cant see the dark brown outline
11-25-2015, 05:19 AM
MarkGraal

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zenfero01

how about the deer horn? i cant see the dark brown outline

Turn up your brightness to see the reindeer antlers.
There is an outline around the entire antler of a different shade of brown. I might make it a little more dark.
11-25-2015, 05:51 AM
*Z.D The Great

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chickenpotpie

What he's saying is I'm his creation.
A product of his evil experiments ;o

Is that how you became so good?
K den, Kendrick I give permission to do evil experiments with me and turn me into a evil creature
11-25-2015, 05:55 AM
Enfy

http://imgur.com/xz9ue9B
Any better?
11-25-2015, 06:03 AM
*Z.D The Great

Fur? kinda things look a bit weird... I recommend removing it
11-25-2015, 10:02 AM
Kelsi

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chickenpotpie

Nu git 2 wrk Kelsi.

wow cry

I'm working very hard ok
11-25-2015, 01:32 PM
asaiki

Quote:

Originally Posted by AceLion

Don't expect to be good in 3 months, or even 2 years.
It takes about 10 years to become a professional artist.

On my 4th month of trying to become a Artist in the digital realm, I became a professional artist. :rolleyes:
not really. but a wannabe.
11-25-2015, 01:48 PM
Tricky

Kendrick-kunnnnnnnn where's that snow globe? <3 Also that snowman hat is REALLY good. :D
11-25-2015, 01:58 PM
Bram

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tricky

Kendrick-kunnnnnnnn where's that snow globe? <3 Also that snowman hat is REALLY good. :D

So cringy how you 2 call eachother
11-25-2015, 02:42 PM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tricky

Kendrick-kunnnnnnnn where's that snow globe? <3 Also that snowman hat is REALLY good. :D

I'm not showing it. I never show my finished work, because they're surprises.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by AceLion

http://imgur.com/xz9ue9B
Any better?

Lose the texture. Kawaii-level: 0. Anyways, looks better.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

Turn up your brightness to see the reindeer antlers.
There is an outline around the entire antler of a different shade of brown. I might make it a little more dark.

Make it as dark as black. Try to lower the contrast.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by ZepeuS

Is that how you became so good?
K den, Kendrick I give permission to do evil experiments with me and turn me into a evil creature

PM me. I'll make you my creation, too.
11-25-2015, 03:53 PM
Froz

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

*Kendrick looks back at Chicken slowly. Does a 360 rotation*
You said, what? Crush. These. Graphics. Out?..
*eyes turn white and starts to bleed from the mouth*
*voice goes deep and satanic*
You never crush me, chicken. I made you! I baked you! Muahaha!

Peasent i shall duel you for your pie

http://ct.fra.bz/ol/fz/sw/i66/2/11/1...tal-fcf13b.jpg
11-25-2015, 07:44 PM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by Froz

Peasent i shall duel you for your pie

http://ct.fra.bz/ol/fz/sw/i66/2/11/1...tal-fcf13b.jpg

That needs less AA and fix jaggy lines on your head.

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http://i.imgur.com/dEGvBJj.png
I decided to doodle something. Then this popped out, so I decided to use it as a Christmas melee. Thoughts? CC?
11-25-2015, 08:00 PM
Bone

http://images.tapatalk-cdn.com/15/11...99b009402f.jpg without a doubt this is the cutest thing I have ever drew
11-25-2015, 08:01 PM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bone

without a doubt this is the cutest thing I have ever drew

Kawaaii, but needs better texture and shading.
11-25-2015, 08:01 PM
Bone

It's a poler bear morph
11-25-2015, 08:04 PM
Bone

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

Kawaaii, but needs better texture and shading.

What Part needs shading. I can't decide if where my light source will be
11-25-2015, 08:17 PM
Bone

http://images.tapatalk-cdn.com/15/11...d869bfef3d.jpg
11-25-2015, 08:27 PM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bone

(Kendrick posted here to not quote that picture.)

Light source is up. Shading needs to be everywhere. Use a white, darkish white-blue, and a dark blue-light.

Finished my sword. I think that should be enough for this contest. Good luck everyone!
11-25-2015, 11:24 PM
BLACK DYNAMITE

1 Attachment(s)

Attachment 25572
Just a lil sumtin sumtin
11-26-2015, 01:49 AM
MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/WEcDg8q.png?1
Fixed the outlines, fixed banding, and fixed some shading errors! Thoughts? ;0

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