Shiz's Art

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Originally Posted by CluTch

SO Sexc ^

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<3.

Looks good with the shading, I recommend increasing helmet length on the side views. Will fit most heads that way instead of contouring to the default head. Other than that it looks very nice.

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Originally Posted by ShizGodsu

http://i57.tinypic.com/2q1fotu.png

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o mi gosh its beautiful ;-;

i like the front view of the gas mask, but i think the helmets top on the side view should be rounder. also, on the side view, it looks...i dont know...interesting. just looks like its sticking out which i dont like. maybe move the lower half closer in, and angling it downward. looks like you just copy pasted the cylinder and got a little lazy :( last, i dont like the wings on the side view. they just sort of fade out which is weird. make them stick onto something haha. I love it though :)

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Originally Posted by Po0p

i like the front view of the gas mask, but i think the helmets top on the side view should be rounder. also, on the side view, it looks...i dont know...interesting. just looks like its sticking out which i dont like. maybe move the lower half closer in, and angling it downward. looks like you just copy pasted the cylinder and got a little lazy :( last, i dont like the wings on the side view. they just sort of fade out which is weird. make them stick onto something haha. I love it though :)

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Laziness is powerful unless you do it and make it look beautiful still :(.
About the side view, the thing sticking out is the nossile and in real life if you were to wear a gas mask (like this) it would stick out. The rounder helmet part I will do (: and as well as the wings.. that part had me cramped up.
I actually took off the nossile on the front view and found it looked much better (I will post the updated version later!)


Thanks for the feedback! :)

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Fixed side views and some lineart.
http://i57.tinypic.com/9j38t1.png

Looking better I look forward to the changes!

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Originally Posted by Ventus

Looking better I look forward to the changes!

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Thanks! :) I'm making another version of the hat. Gas mask, a halo, and wings then Godelic will decide on which hat they like better.

you make too many masks, try get out of your comfort zone and do some bright things that don't cover the face :confused:

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Originally Posted by Myst

you make too many masks, try get out of your comfort zone and do some bright things that don't cover the face :confused:

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You obviously haven't seen many of my hats. Not my fault. (And actually this was a request, so whoops?)

http://i62.tinypic.com/29bkk1e.png
Version 2 of the hat. Gonna let them decide on what they like.

I like that version, will you be adding the wing glow to the side view? Parts of the gold showing on the sides?