Attachment 29510 Any suggestions, criticisms, anything is appreciated.
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Attachment 29510 Any suggestions, criticisms, anything is appreciated.
Attachment 29511
Just a update of a frozen m4, more submissions soon to come. Please comment on something that can be improved
Outline plsQuote:
Originally Posted by Snooby
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Add ice on the muzzle. The bullet looks weird don't whats wrong with it. Good job thoQuote:
Originally Posted by Snooby
I doubt they'll add a skin for a item only 50 ish or less people haveQuote:
Originally Posted by Blur
:/ the hat looks bad. First you did pillow shading on the eyebrows and mouth. Secondly, the outline is wrong, the gray destroyed the look. Finally shade and add lighting colours to the hat. It has 20% shading. You asked for criticism and you got it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Pootis Heavy
Noice, you wasted your time with making a bullet skin, you can't change the skin of the bullets(well you could but it would take scripting just for something that moves to fast to see)Quote:
Originally Posted by Snooby
Hm I didn't know that , eh still fun to add onQuote:
Originally Posted by Froz
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So like this?
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Do it all over again by scratch. That outline looks so familiar..Quote:
Originally Posted by Pootis Heavy
Create a dark outline, don't have a light outline.
Your shading is very vague. Darken the shading, don't be shy.
The mouth is too thick.
Eyes need to be AA'd.
Your shape is too jaggied and doesn't look like a circle. Same goes with the side views.
If you're wanting to add the white, add it inside the outline.
Also the gun is bigger than what i would doQuote:
Originally Posted by Snooby
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