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Nice levels.
Feedback:
http://i.imgur.com/IynLxvR.pngReally like this level, although the way the trees are placed spoils it a little, but neglecting that the building itself is Well done.
Note: I'd remove the door and simply add windows there as there is not alot of walking room making the terrace redundant.
All in All, it's a nice level.
http://i.imgur.com/GbvaWuo.png
A very nice level.
I feel like the floor needs more flair in design. It feels empty so try to add something here and there.
Shading and level design looks good so it's still a very nice level.
http://i.imgur.com/3gDnYcr.png
A veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice level.
Believe it or not, when you get used to the tiles making that Interior can take me 15-20 minutes but what makes your level pop out is the NPC's.
I can't remember the Forum member said this but they're advice was: "Keep the level relatively simple, but use NPC lighting to make it look good".
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Thanks for the feedback. :)
And yeah NPC lighting for sure does a lot of good stuff
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Right now I'm working on a new version of the auction house (I don't expect this level to replace it, I just thought it'd be a cool idea. I mean don't get me wrong, it would be pretty cool if it did get replaced with my level but yeah)
It's almost done, I'm making the lobby right now. It looks pretty cool so far. Stay tuned to see it :D.
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Hello everyone! I have completed the auction level. (Be Aware: I could not find an image of the board that shows the time, so I just didn't add it)
http://imgur.com/a/Ogbik <-- To see the level, click on the link
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Have any feedback/tips? Reply to the thread!!
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Your levels are really nice man, but one question. How do make lights in your level? Is it hard to make them?
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It actually isn't hard at all. I'll show you how to make them. (I don't know how to make the shapes of the lights, but I know how to change the properties of the lights)
Step 1.) Usually every Graal application comes with the image 'Light2.png'
Step 2.) Place an NPC down in your level, and then for the image type in 'Light2.png
Step 3.) Use this code (This is the code used for every light)
//#CLIENTSIDE
if (playerenters) {
setcoloreffect 1,1,0.7,0.3;
drawaslight;
drawoverplayer;
dontblock;
}
You may ask, how do I change the color of the light? Well here's a chart of all colors, and what numbers you would place in to get that color. (It's the first 3 numbers in that code) https://tut.org/pracjourn/2007-4/walden/color.pdf
The 4th number is basically how much the light appears. The higher the number, the more brighter it will be. The lower, the less visible it would be. (Less transparency)
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8/30/17 Hello everyone, so today is my early release day from school. Meaning, a good amount of spare time on my hands to make some levels. Today I might even make two levels for the thread. A level I'm currently working on right now is an outside level. it will have cliffs, and a beach. It will be wonderful. (Looking great so far)
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I finished the level! I think it looks very nice and neat. Have any tips or feedback? Feel free to reply to this thread, it helps me out :).
Here's the links:
http://imgur.com/a/1Rkwz
<--- To see the WHOLE level, click on BOTH links
http://imgur.com/a/k8rkE
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Added a new level, if anyone wants to check it out :)
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7 more views until this thread reaches 2000 views. That's great :D
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8/31/17 - Hello everyone, I'm glad to announce that I have another level to show you :). It's a spar room that I ended up making. Have feedback, or any tips? Please, feel free to reply to the thread. I highly appreciate it when you do.
http://imgur.com/a/xWnmv
<--- To see the WHOLE level, click on BOTH links
http://imgur.com/a/wmrGX
The thread reached 2,000 views, awesome.
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Anyone able to give me feedback please?
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haven't seen the thread for about two weeks, but based off your most recent levels, you've improved!! it's awesome
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Thanks for the feedback :)
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I would really like it if someone could give their feedback. I haven't received any feedback lately, so that's why I haven't released more levels.
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Well, I'm working on another level for the thread right now. I'm not sure if anyone would like to give some feedback on my most recent levels. It would be highly appreciated :)
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Okay, so I can't release levels right now because the power is out due to hurricane Irma. The date that I said I was working on a level was the date when my family then decided to actually start evacuating. But now we're back home from evacuating, and there's one issue. The power is out, which prevents me from going on my PC.
But I promise you all, once this power comes back on, I will start working on those levels again! And hopefully get some feedback this time too.
I just wanted to let everyone know incase anyone thought I was slacking, or having any kind of inactivity, which isn't the case here :).
Power is back on
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Hello everyone, so it's been a little while since I've released a level, and that's due to Hurricane Irma. However, the power is back on and I can start doing levels again. With the power back on, I ended up making a new level for the thread. I think it came out very nice, and I want to see if anyone else agrees with me. I would highly appreciate it if anyone can give me feedback/tips on my level. It helps me out and It'll help me the next time I make another level. But anyways, here it is:
https://imgur.com/a/OZKYE
<--- To see the WHOLE level, click on BOTH links.
https://imgur.com/a/M8070
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I like you're levels lapiz. You've really been progressing since we last worked together. I don't really have much feedback to give you, but keep working at it and I can't wait to see what other levels you come out with.
