Christmas Presents 2016

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11-28-2016, 09:33 PM
Legendary Johnny

Quote:

Originally Posted by luoS

Yes, but in this case: Quality > Quantity

I got something for you:

QUALITY WORK TIME!!!!!
11-28-2016, 09:39 PM
Raul Zephlyn

Quote:

Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny

Blue Ball Orbiting rod(with shooting ability)Attachment 29679 Attachment 29680

Heavy CC required

The balls are pillow shaded, you need more unequal shading which will give it dimension. I don't want to sound rude or anything but I'm not really sure how it has a connection to christmas, try to change the colors to resemble Christmas. There's also 2 different lightsources, the balls are reflecting light from an angle and the handle is reflecting light vertically, the light source is confusing.
11-28-2016, 09:43 PM
Legendary Johnny

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raul Zephlyn

The balls are pillow shaded, you need more unequal shading which will give it dimension. I don't want to sound rude or anything but I'm not really sure how it has a connection to christmas, try to change the colors to resemble Christmas. There's also 2 different lightsources, the balls are reflecting light from an angle and the handle is reflecting light vertically, the light source is confusing.

I always love your CC! Its on point everytime! Noted about dimension and colours for Christmas. But it isn't pillow shaded as the light ain't coming in the middle?
11-28-2016, 09:44 PM
Raul Zephlyn

Quote:

Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny

I always love your CC! Its on point everytime! Noted about dimension and colours for Christmas. But it isn't pillow shaded as the light ain't coming in the middle?

Mind if I do an edit of a single sprite?
11-28-2016, 09:45 PM
MarkGraal

Quote:

Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny

So true(crying)! Thats so thoughtful and such a motivated speech. I'll try to be humble(no promises).

Anyways I remaked EVERYTHING with correct colours so please give CC as best as you can:

Attachment 29662
Anger bud hat
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Bin(furniture)
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Christmas C Balls juggle
Attachment 29665
Christmas Bombs Juggle
Attachment 29666
Green gas Christmas bomb
Attachment 29667
Red Claw Pencil
Attachment 29668
Rudolph red nose hat
Attachment 29669
Water bubble juggle
Attachment 29670
CC Scythe(didn't remake)
Attachment 29671
CC Trident(didn't remake)
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Christmas little frog knife
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Elf Daggers

Please tell me whats the best to you in this design list and rate it out of 10.
NOTE: 3 more items to come tomorrow that will or 2 of them will have gif animation as people are requesting but u can reply and state what you want me to design(must be either tps, melees,hats and juggles.

All of your stuff is flat. Add more value. You also have no refined the shape of any of your pieces. Rework the shape as much as possible as shape is a very important element in any piece of art. Also try use colors that are easier on the eye such as saturated or light pastele colors.
11-28-2016, 09:48 PM
Legendary Johnny

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raul Zephlyn

Mind if I do an edit of a single sprite?

Go head

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Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

All of your stuff is flat. Add more value. You also have no refined the shape of any of your pieces. Rework the shape as much as possible as shape is a very important element in any piece of art. Also try use colors that are easier on the eye such as saturated or light pastele colors.

Rip my designs submission date is today. Sigh everything! I'll try if I have time tomorrow
11-29-2016, 11:29 PM
MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/77ujpxZ.png
cc pls
11-29-2016, 11:35 PM
Tricky

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/77ujpxZ.png
cc pls

Imo it looks too busy with all the trying to make it look fluffy, there's too much going on, and the elf looks rather angry. Think you'd wanna make it happy. :p
11-29-2016, 11:43 PM
MarkGraal

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Originally Posted by Tricky

Imo it looks too busy with all the trying to make it look fluffy, there's too much going on, and the elf looks rather angry. Think you'd wanna make it happy. :p

ill rework the eyes. thanks for the cc
11-30-2016, 01:14 AM
Raul Zephlyn

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/77ujpxZ.png
cc pls

I think the elf looks really good, but the small highlight near the nostrils should not belong there, other than that the elf looks really good. I think it looks a little mean though, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for but that's how it looks xD. The hat looks weird with all the circular shading on it, a hat wouldn't consist on having that many constant circle-like shades on it, it does have a really nice shape though. The Santa sprite arms are a little too long for it's size.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Raul Zephlyn

I think the elf looks really good, but the small highlight near the nostrils should not belong there, other than that the elf looks really good. I think it looks a little mean though, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for but that's how it looks xD. The hat looks weird with all the circular shading on it, a hat wouldn't consist on having that many constant circle-like shades on it, it does have a really nice shape though. The Santa sprite arms are a little too long for it's size.

-On another note I like the elf sprite with the pink cheeks better :3
11-30-2016, 04:30 AM
MarkGraal

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raul Zephlyn

I think the elf looks really good, but the small highlight near the nostrils should not belong there, other than that the elf looks really good. I think it looks a little mean though, I'm not sure if that's what you were going for but that's how it looks xD. The hat looks weird with all the circular shading on it, a hat wouldn't consist on having that many constant circle-like shades on it, it does have a really nice shape though. The Santa sprite arms are a little too long for it's size.

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-On another note I like the elf sprite with the pink cheeks better :3

yeah, made some changes whilst on discord.
ill post it l8or though, gotta do some hw

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http://i.imgur.com/vJllYyO.png http://i.imgur.com/vJllYyO.png
12-01-2016, 02:09 AM
BL1NK

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pootis Heavy

Attachment 29560 criticism plox

This reminds me of the iFreeze hat.
12-01-2016, 02:35 AM
MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/DcWNmo4.gif
small snowglobe
12-01-2016, 12:38 PM
Legendary Johnny

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/DcWNmo4.gif
small snowglobe

Nice animation and nice design.(im using a pc at the moment)
But make a small house on the inside
12-02-2016, 04:47 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny

Nice animation and nice design.(im using a pc at the moment)
But make a small house on the inside

Eh, I think it's fine how it is.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

http://i.imgur.com/DcWNmo4.gif
small snowglobe

http://imgur.com/h8WWUIX.png
Here's what I mean. No outline on the snow and lighten it.
12-02-2016, 09:04 PM
MarkGraal

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

Eh, I think it's fine how it is.

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http://imgur.com/h8WWUIX.png
Here's what I mean. No outline on the snow and lighten it.

make the shadow lighter? will do :)
12-02-2016, 09:14 PM
N!chola$

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkGraal

make the shadow lighter? will do :)

Wow..ill take 4 of those.
12-04-2016, 08:23 PM
Nite the Knight

now that markgraal is banned from GraalOnline Era, GraalOnline Era Discord and Era-go, looks like he won't be participating anymore. was looking forward to some of his stuff :/
12-04-2016, 08:50 PM
Legendary Johnny

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Quote:

Originally Posted by nite the knight

now that markgraal is banned from graalonline era, graalonline era discord and era-go, looks like he won't be participating anymore. Was looking forward to some of his stuff :/

wtf!!!! What did he do to get ban from everything!!!! I wanted his stuff!!!!! Sigh his designs will be nullified :( :( :(

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Attachment 29708
Christmas Spear

Attachment 29709
Dark Candy Katana

Btw today is my deadline so wish me luck on the 17 designs I made.
12-06-2016, 04:08 AM
iridan

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Attachment 29733 tut tut train store.
12-10-2016, 12:52 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by iridan

Attachment 29733 tut tut train store.

The perspective is so off.. I don't know whether I am looking up or in front. Confusing- that's all I can say.
12-10-2016, 04:33 AM
iridan

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Kendrick

The perspective is so off.. I don't know whether I am looking up or in front. Confusing- that's all I can say.

okay. I amend it.Attachment 29772
12-10-2016, 04:41 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by iridan

okay. I amend it.Attachment 29772

The color for the snow is on the right track, but the darker shade needs to be a bit more darker and blue-er. Also, the snow on the top is very rough.
12-10-2016, 06:39 AM
Arnold Graal II

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raul Zephlyn

The balls are pillow shaded, you need more unequal shading which will give it dimension. I don't want to sound rude or anything but I'm not really sure how it has a connection to christmas, try to change the colors to resemble Christmas. There's also 2 different lightsources, the balls are reflecting light from an angle and the handle is reflecting light vertically, the light source is confusing.

Hopefully they added it in.

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12-10-2016, 08:47 PM
Grandpa

Can i get special candy cane bars in my jail cell. Like can someone make those for me?? I want to feel festive too. Lmao jk.. im like the only one up with lights in my apartment complex.. like the only decorations

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12-11-2016, 02:10 AM
Reborned

I Submitted my work and Good luck to all.

http://i.imgur.com/Nat2Vbk.png

Preview of a hat I made.
12-11-2016, 02:16 AM
Arnold Graal II

Just waiting for the presents and holiday shop to open.

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12-11-2016, 02:24 AM
Kendrick

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arnold Graal II

Just waiting for the presents and holiday shop to open.

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Then wait for Christmas Eve or the week of it.
12-11-2016, 03:27 AM
Arnold Graal II

I am :3

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12-11-2016, 06:25 AM
luoS

Luckily I made the submission by the deadline, me and my procrastinating butt. Good luck to all who submitted.
12-11-2016, 02:54 PM
WreX

Gl everyone
12-11-2016, 03:11 PM
Soojin

Yeah, Goodluck to everyone, can't wait to see your works in-game, I bet they're awesome!
12-12-2016, 11:37 AM
Q8JsSoOm

is this thread gonna get closed?
12-12-2016, 11:42 AM
Soojin

Quote:

Originally Posted by Q8JsSoOm

is this thread gonna get closed?

probably after the winners are announced.
12-12-2016, 08:56 PM
Hallow

gl all :)
12-12-2016, 09:00 PM
imaginary

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Originally Posted by Hallow

gl all :)

*gets banned*
12-12-2016, 09:11 PM
bluedragon123

Gl yall i didnt get to participate in this contest cause bigger things came up for me but gl yall from me
12-12-2016, 09:13 PM
N!chola$

Quote:

Originally Posted by bluedragon123

Gl yall i didnt get to participate in this contest cause bigger things came up for me but gl yall from me

Hope you join next year:)
Best of wishes;)
12-17-2016, 08:42 AM
Ira

soo, When do we get the gralats?
12-17-2016, 03:21 PM
Bulletzone

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ira

soo, When do we get the gralats?

Never ;)

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