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So I am new to pixel art, I am more of a "3D artist" guy, but I have done some heads and hats in the past. This is my first go at making a gun (or really anything other than a head or hat), and it took me about two-three hours. I wasn't happy with the shading many times so I kept redoing it. Overall I am happy with the final result because it was only my first time, although it is far from perfect :( . Any feedback would be nice. (Click the images to enlarge)
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wow.. this is really amazing :)
Thanks man :D
nice its a really good gun :)
I really love this.
It's very good for your first gun! ;)
Very nice job Frodew! :)
I appreciate the positive feedback :) , but does anyone have any tips or suggestions?
Looks great, front grip looks a bit pointy
Awesome! Could u tell me how to make these!
Another one of those people... Posts a few things, and you never see them again.
Work on your line art a little bit more the front of the gun looks weirdly shaped. Good job though for your first gun
Lol, yes that is true... I took a break from Graal for a few months. :oQuote:
Originally Posted by Tripl3D
That is probably one of the best first guns I have seen. I respect you for saying that it was far from perfect and willing to take constructive criticism as most other people just post it say it's amazing and then move onto the next one. Because of this I will help you improve on it. Firstly your size and shape is pretty decent, I would suggest flattening the stock a bit more and adding a bit more width to the barrel. I usually go with a barrel of 3 pixels wide and then work from there. Your shading it also good for your first gun, and I like the beige colour you've used. I would recommend using a darker beige shade on the outsides of the barrel to give it some contrast. The handle needs a bit of fixing since it looks wonky and I would make the magazine a pixel wider. I will do a quick edit of it now to show you what I mean.
K this is the edit I came up with in about 10 mins showing how I would have done it with a very basic idea of how I would have shaded it with the changed to the shape. Also just note I didn't really finish editing it so the shading and details aren't really added, so now you have ago. I highly recommend working on this gun and making it look amazing before you start trying to make other guns
http://i1353.photobucket.com/albums/...psae2c8e0d.jpg
Is this for the assault rifle with the 2 shot burst? I like it a lot and would use it instead of the default one actually.
Wow, thank you for the advice! It might just be my computer, but the image you posted isn't showing...
EDIT: Never mind it works, wow amazing job on the remake :0