My first level!

Hey,
I have just installed the GraalEditor and I've been experimenting with it: this is the result :)
Give me feedback on here please ;)

http://bit.ly/MyFirstLevel (Better Quality)
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It's nice, but mind if you add more stuff to the level? The building looks odd with the windows so low...

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Originally Posted by CluTch

It's nice, but mind if you add more stuff to the level? The building looks odd with the windows so low...

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Yeah, I'll keep working on it ;) I'll post the result here, thanks for your feedback :D

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Originally Posted by Noone

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Thanks!

:D Can you tell me what you are making?

this is kinda empty

It's great so far for a first level! I suggest adding some windows, and maybe some grass detail! Other than that, keep up the great work!

Damian is right, add more things but so far.. like it :D

The building is insanely large for Era, assuming that it's for Era since you used it's tileset.

Era's buildings are much smaller, so that the windows and doors look normal on it. Also, the stairs you made (assuming), are incorrect. Those are inside stairs, also the red line on them shouldnt repeat itself. Makes the stairs look weird.

Pretty good for a first level.

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Originally Posted by Cosmo

Pretty good for a first level.

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Thanks :)

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Originally Posted by ShizGodsu

The building is insanely large for Era, assuming that it's for Era since you used it's tileset.

Era's buildings are much smaller, so that the windows and doors look normal on it. Also, the stairs you made (assuming), are incorrect. Those are inside stairs, also the red line on them shouldnt repeat itself. Makes the stairs look weird.

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Thanks for your feedback, where can I get the iEra tileset?

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Originally Posted by Alex Damian

It's great so far for a first level! I suggest adding some windows, and maybe some grass detail! Other than that, keep up the great work!

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Thanks, I wanted to add flowers and such things, but I didn't find them in the tileset :(

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Originally Posted by Cinos

:D Can you tell me what you are making?

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My first level, didn't have a plan, haha :D

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Originally Posted by Daniel 123

this is kinda empty

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Yeah, I know :o Wanted to add more things, couldn't find 'em..

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Originally Posted by Kendrick

Damian is right, add more things but so far.. like it :D

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Thank you :)

Its fab. I looked at it and im like. "Wow. That's cool, I should learn how to make stuff like that."
(No sarcasm :D I like it)

Quite nice c: o
I have no idea how u all get era tileset I had tried everything still cant get lol.