Halloween Stuff

Attachment 13336Attachment 13337Attachment 13338 Sooo I have started to try and make stuff for this years halloween/graaloween and these were originally for the pixel academy so they all share the same palette I started with the 3rd one and got some tips to make the second one then I got more tips and made the first picture which I will turn into a hat. Tell me what you guys think, please dont be nice needs some good criticism not just nice job or nice pumpkin.

hmm idk what to sat nice job!

Too much unnecessary dithering. But overall, gj

I love how the second hat turned out. The only thing that looks off to me, would be the shape of the hat. It's too oval-like, take the first picture for example, and shape something like that into the hat.

Pumpkins...

heres how it turned out, and I will do what you said mystic.

Well you don't have to do it exactly like it, it was an observation. Do whatever you feel looks good, I'm not the best at graphics so don't take my advice 100% xP

On your pumpkin, the dark line creases in the pumpkin shouldnt be the same color on the entire pumpkin. It should follow just as light source should. In other words it should get lighter as the main light source gets lighter. Otherwise, it looks odd with a very dark crease in a bright area. If anything, put some empty spots in the light areas of it (meaning it shouldnt be a solid line.)

But I like it. Cute animation too (: And nice palette you used. But just a little advice from me to you to help improve. :)

Hmmm ugly or nah

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Much better!

Thx what else do you reccomend me fixing/adding/removing

Remastered death spear.

These look awesome :D

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Remastered death spear.

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I'd add more details to it tbh. Kind of bland imo.

Do 4 me pls

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Do 4 me pls

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Okie

http://i.imgur.com/lbLWoz4.png

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http://i.imgur.com/8ZthgOz.png

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Okie

http://i.imgur.com/lbLWoz4.png

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Okie

http://i.imgur.com/lbLWoz4.png

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This looks good however the blade doens't use any lighting perspective on yours =o. For example, Banshee's lightsource is on the right of the blade but yours has none. To fix this I suggest:
- making the right side of the blade's colors a bit brighter
- the left a tad bit darker

Should give it a more "alive" feeling. Overall B+, good job on it. :)

Ho lee fuk

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i try