Hey guys!
I will be posting all the levels ive made here ive been leveling for awhile but havent really showed much people.
Feedback would be appreciated
http://imgur.com/a/j54VC.jpg
http://imgur.com/a/j54VC
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Hey guys!
I will be posting all the levels ive made here ive been leveling for awhile but havent really showed much people.
Feedback would be appreciated
http://imgur.com/a/j54VC.jpg
http://imgur.com/a/j54VC
I can't see the image.
Too houses kind of mirror eachother maybe re arrange the top section.
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Originally Posted by Esmeree
O nice , I like the 2nd image, 3rd image looks flat
Ugh improve please
1. Great shape, needs a bit more detail (Try using NPCs)
2. Overall great level, stairs are a bit too skinny for my liking, how are you going to climb them :(
3. Flat and boring, by far the worst of all three.
Keep it up!
Thanks guys
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Couldve gave a better description maybe?Quote:
Originally Posted by Graal Pro
Nice levels.
the ol west one looking cool
Like you can do better XDQuote:
Originally Posted by Graal Pro
Nice
Nice levels
http://imgur.com/a/udT5j
New level
looks cool and sexy and amazing:D
Level overall is great, the only thing that's kind of grasping me is the porch on the left side.Quote:
Originally Posted by bluedragon123
Is there going to be a use for it?
It feels a bit small, maybe space out the buildings so it's more symmetrical?
Dunno, but I really like your levels so far, they're nice. :)
Thank you, Nicholas. ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by N!chola$
Not talking about you!
Wow nice levels! Keep up the good work and you could definitely be hired for the lat team.
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These are interesting and unique. I would love to see something like this added into Era.
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Thank you so much guys! I appreciate the feedbackQuote:
Originally Posted by Stilts
Very "supercalifragilisticexpialidocious" level.
Although I don't know how I feel about the walls :/ Are they inspired by Relo's style?
It may just be me, but the walls just look flat.
Add more to the Grass aswell :p
Goodjob.
Yea relo taught me alot when i first started outQuote:
Originally Posted by Bulletzone
http://imgur.com/a/9NITu Shack i made for kendricks shop idea
Y u no join LAT?Quote:
Originally Posted by bluedragon123
LAT's not hiring right now, that's what Untilthemoonrises said on another thread.Quote:
Originally Posted by AliGamer911
http://imgur.com/a/Q2Jek
The inside for kendricks shack
Woah that's actually really good
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Inside of the shack is very well made, but the orange is a bight hard to look at, experiment with different colors to see what works.
The outside level is pretty bare, watch out for wall height and the door's borders.
The log cabin is alright, it has a pretty good concept that could be touched upon, especially that porch on the left that's terrible to look at. Side note, don't use the same tiles for the porch and the siding, it's confusing to look at.
I need good cc please!
https://m.imgur.com/a/nmKTiEn
(I don't know how to put the actual picture on the post)
https://i.imgur.com/77fi8lH.png
1. Shading is very inconsistent or non-existent. Make sure the perspective is right and the shading goes behind the wall.
2. Wall height is inconsistent as well. This can make or break a level, so you should guarantee that the proportions are consistent.
3. Lots of overlap between trims, try to not clash two "outer" trims next to another, for sake of perspective this is confusing and creates a lot of visual noise.
4. This level feels very bare and open. Try to add more furniture, maybe glass tables? I'd suggest dividing the level into small rooms such as a kitchen, which could have stairs that lead down to a living room, etc.
5. Overall this level needs more NPCs. I know that not all players have access to a large variety of images, but spice it up with some lights, windows, paintings, couches, counters etc. This level feels like a template house.
To conclude, this level's "Skeleton" is functional, and with a few tweaks could make a great canvas for you to paint some NPCs on.
Make sure to rework the perspective when it comes to shading, make sure everything is proportional, and watch out for small tile errors (Especially on the floor on the right side, those 3-tile floors are tricky to work with.)
Best of luck reworking this and making it a complete final product!
I needed this thank you ill post an updated version when im done fixing n stuff.Quote:
Originally Posted by Gabipants
https://m.imgur.com/a/PukCshV
Update! Cc please
The shading still needs a bit of work, I don't understand the bush's placement tbh, wall height needs fixed up a tad bit, stuff like that. If I remember to, here later I'll try to show you where exactly at.
Good improvement! Although try to review a few things I mentioned previously (Especially the inconsistency). If you have 3-tile walls somewhere, there needs to be 3-tile walls everywhere (Except in very rare cases such as with multiple floors, etc.)
Can you please point out where in the walls im messing up? I cant seem to find it tysmQuote:
Originally Posted by Gabipants
https://m.imgur.com/a/dKrmLjy
Update^^^^^
Cc please
https://imgur.com/a/UE5AErA
Some of my new levels, cc is welcomed :), i had limited npcs.
One year later... :p
I noticed you were using the very old Ol'West tiles and I wanted to give you some references from a good LAT friend of mine using the latest ones just in case you still interested on learning levelign with West's tileset:
(Ol'West) You can check these levels here: https://imgur.com/a/FFR0b5h
(Era) This one was made by Kazly: http://imgur.com/a/0Fmhw6E
If you still leveling let me know, I'd love to see your progress :o
Thanks for sharing, very useful techniques.:)