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I think the purple and the red one lack outlines
Nice designs, but remember to shade it to add some depth to your masks.
Nice hat, Zay! Keep it up!
Lacks realism. Not shading wise, but outline wise.
Front frame would be all straight, no curve, due to the side frames being completely straight.
Needs texture and better shading.
Welp
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I guess i can try and fix it
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I like the first hat
Eh turns out im to lazy to fix xD
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Too lazy? If you're too lazy to fix something, will you be able to continue graphics? I don't see a potential if you're lazy.
Allow me to give you a helping hand.
http://imgur.com/Aw9Jtey.png
Right off the bat, there is no shading nor lighting.
In order to make a perfect piece, listen up Trav, you have to outline your graphic(s).
http://imgur.com/FLM6Yq0.png
Your mask isn't symmetrical at all. Depending on the piece, some will consist with/without any sort of symmetry.
Let's fix your mistake.
So it was made, but something seems off.. the width of your headband seems a bit too small.
Let's enlarge it by two pixels and have some curves to fix the simplicity.
Also, masks cover the whole mouth and appear to be wrapped around the head.
http://imgur.com/cks4rNL.png
Great! Now we have the outline. Let's choose its colors.
Here read this (yes, read): http://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=10695
After you choose your colors, put the primary color within the outline with your bucket tool. Now, recall that the lighting is on the top, so the light will always hit the top and the bottom will be a bit darker.
Sides are usually darker because it's curving and light is being lost with curves. (Depending on the material, it differs. Metal usually have light reflecting on the edge.)
http://imgur.com/tpptEhW.png
I'm no expert but it should look something like this. Always have an outline unless you're making something minuscule.
That's all I will teach you.
What to do next time: add more curves, have a shading, use color, and don't be lazy or else you'll go nowhere.
But hey if wanna finish that u can lol
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why dont you see what he did and try to finish your hat from what you understand from his help?
I like the first one the best :)