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Hello I am currently in the process of learning LAT and have made 3 levels in 2 days and i'm looking for feedback
Spar Arena
https://prnt.sc/g44hhw
Small Hat Shop
outside: https://prnt.sc/g442dl
inside: https://prnt.sc/g442we
Chance Level:
https://prnt.sc/g3qpsh
Feedback on these are welcomed and any tips are appreciated
"LAT" stands for Levels Administration Team...
But otherwise nice levels :)
I love them they are nice levels
New Level incoming! Had a lot of fun with this one and got a little help with picking out the tiles
https://prnt.sc/g468md
https://prnt.sc/g468i9
The spar arena is pretty bad in my opinion, if you want it to be a masterpiece, go to iEra's Spar rooms and learn.
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So is the small hat shop, its too simple, again, if you wanna make something good, go to iEra or Era PC and look at the buildings and learn, dont worry to take a screenshot of it and copy it, I would do that and now im on my own and I make good levels.
Hey, what program do you use? Those are nice, just the spar arena shouldn't look so "messy"
Too simple but you could improve :)
Hes using the built-in Level Editor in a server.Quote:
Originally Posted by Xur
Spar Arena: Messy. Has multiple tile errors. Pretty much just a rectangle with seats underneath. Try and be a little creative
Hat shop: Multiple tile errors on roof. Windows don't fit well. Again, it's just a rectangle. I like that you made a border around the door, though.
Inside: This is a bit better, however your desk should be one tile up (so it looks like it's pressing up against the wall). Your tables on the sides have tile errors, where's the top of the tables? Entrance is too long. Make the indent one or two tiles. For the chairs below the table, move them one tile up (gives illusion of being pressed up against table) and for the chairs above, cut them in half (gives illusion of being under table). Also, again - it's a rectangle.
Chance level: I like it, just make the chair adjustments i stated previously. Also, make the table in the centre a little wider (one extra tile to the left) so it's parallel + correctly aligned.
I like it, but like someone pointed out the hat shop (outside) looks a bit simple :o
Seems like you didn't add any detail, for example when your making the transition from road to grass you need to add the tile that connects it. Which would first be side walk then grass.
Your building has no creativity, add things like windows, multi level characteristics, etc...
your roofs are hell.
Those links look suspicious, im not clicking them.
Just some new stuff I've made
https://prnt.sc/gesnwx
https://prnt.sc/gesnz0
https://prnt.sc/geso1w
https://prnt.sc/gct79f
https://prnt.sc/gcso7t