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this is the first hat i have ever made. Please give feedback!
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Attachment 31568
this is the first hat i have ever made. Please give feedback!
seems good for first hat
things you can improve are the shading the shading dont realy show any shape or anything details the hat is pretty simple there is no texture or anything to the horns wich make it looks unrealistic jaggies your outline is jaggie you can look up in google what jaggies means and such it will be helpful
How do people shade like so good it seems hard as heck
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This is good shading?Quote:
Originally Posted by Zayzay
idk i do shading with real pencil art so i kinda just take what i learned from that and use here
Im talking in general
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thanks for the feedbackQuote:
Originally Posted by WreX
dude nice try bro
CC: the colors are dull! look up tutorials on colors selection. next, there is no lighting on it nor texture so its flat.
overall: 3/10
thanks for the feedback! :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny
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another hat buy me!Quote:
Originally Posted by Davedosejoe
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Originally Posted by Davedosejoe
The shape of the hat seems weird
you must work on your jaggies the outline is very jaggie you usualy do outline like this then fix it to be good and with no jaggies
lol this is same colors........play with colors with different saturation and value also with different hue shifting.Quote:
Originally Posted by Davedosejoe
plus u double outline some parts and jaggies all ver the designs...........u need to listen to constructive criticism by any fellow graphics artist here on the forum.
Sorry... I don't get a lot of those termsQuote:
Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny
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look up pixel art tutorials on YouTube it helps alotQuote:
Originally Posted by Davedosejoe
Ok will do when I get back to my moms [emoji106]Quote:
Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny
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ok good, plus pm if need help with anything else
Ok thanks!Quote:
Originally Posted by Legendary Johnny
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Traditional art and pixel are very different in their own way, think of where the light is...Quote:
Originally Posted by Davedosejoe
also think about the shading that it will show the shape of the item you want in the most realistic way with details and such
anyways if you dont get some things we tell you google images can show you how jaggies look and such google is realy helpful to understand things like this
another hat buy me! not done yet gunna take all the feedback and try to use it on this hat! Attachment 31595
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finally finished this one :) I think I like it! Attachment 31596Quote:
Originally Posted by Davedosejoe
I think you need to change the tone for the sides.
I like your hats man :)
Keep it up!
I mean they're ok. But the wizard hat thing the side views look really awkward.
Better than 75% of hats on era :)
Thanks manQuote:
Originally Posted by N!chola$
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Ya I can see Ima try to fix thatQuote:
Originally Posted by JungleJimmy
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Thanks that means a lotQuote:
Originally Posted by Josh Oligarch
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So talented! ;-; If only I could be talented like you...and not be busy 24/7.. xD
perspective seems a little weird the way the hat bottom part goes with the head and the way the top part of it (the more sharp shaped part) goes seems a little weird side view shape should also improve also i dont see any visible shading that shows the hat shape as it should beQuote:
Originally Posted by Davedosejoe
Thanks manQuote:
Originally Posted by NemoYang
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i forgot i had that account wow