Created an New Gun

Hello People! I came to show you my First Art Work of an Gun I made,

Its my first time ever doing Gun GFX so I'm proud of myself of it.

I wanted to show you guy's secondly and ask what you guys think about it.

Of course it didnt go as Planned :(

I was trying to go for the RO933 witch came from BFH

Witch of course I would love to hear some Advice from some Good Gun Creator's

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Looks good. But it needs more shading. There is only one color at the top. Try using darker and brighter colors. Anyways it's good.

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Originally Posted by Wast

Looks good. But it needs more shading. There is only one color at the top. Try using darker and brighter colors. Anyways it's good.

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Really?

Mhm didn't think it would need much.

So just shade the top Basiclly?

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Nice! Will you use it to gun me down as well?

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Originally Posted by AliGamer911

Nice! Will you use it to gun me down as well?

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Wat ever I can get my hands on m8

"Grabs 2D Pixle Knife*



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Looks great. I don't see any improvement

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Originally Posted by Javi Javilian

Wat ever I can get my hands on m8

"Grabs 2D Pixle Knife*



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What a nice guy! Will John be there to assist you?

pieces of it look suspiciously familiar. Im not saying its stolen or a frankenstein of other guns yet, but thats what im low key thinking.

there is not really any definitive details to the guns other than the outline and the red dot in it. Add contrast to the colors and try doing more than just two colors to show where there are lines. guns are usually metal and should shine a little. try to give off that appearance.

it looks too simple the shading dont show any shape or anything there just some little bright parts

Its not to bad, Just use bright colors more

Deleted the other one gun and made an New one.

I made this one off the



Real gun version, I made it without the Suppersior,Aim'Grip

How's this one?
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Originally Posted by Javi Javilian

Really?

Mhm didn't think it would need much.

So just shade the top Basiclly?

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Yes. Kinda, no shading makes it look flat

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Originally Posted by Javi Javilian

Deleted the other one gun and made an New one.

I made this one off the



Real gun version, I made it without the Suppersior,Aim'Grip

How's this one?
https://uploads.tapatalk-cdn.com/201...7918671a12.jpghttps://uploads.tapatalk-cdn.com/201...ebddfe1bda.jpghttps://uploads.tapatalk-cdn.com/201...e50afda955.jpg

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This one is good. U used shading but I think it still needs a bit more colors

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Originally Posted by Wast

Yes. Kinda, no shading makes it look flat

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This one is good. U used shading but I think it still needs a bit more colors

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I'll take an look at it.

Made some changes,

Added an lil darker color to it,

Added the Angled Griphttps://uploads.tapatalk-cdn.com/201...dc93315853.jpghttps://uploads.tapatalk-cdn.com/201...21de1f7397.jpghttps://uploads.tapatalk-cdn.com/201...64fb3f268f.jpg

Like it. Looks good. But add a few details.
I am not a good GFX artist. Assk Wrex

Its a good attempt, but:

1. Never use inside black lines
2. Colours needs more contrast
3. It seems as if there are two light source, u should shade from one direction

BTW, u should take time to review your work and do quality work on it.

shading looks random at some parts there are no shading or no visible shading would recommend not to use as dark lines inside the gun when the most of the colors of it is bright at some parts it just ruin your space where you need to shade it you have those lines that breaks the shading for the shading to make sense i can recommend to try show the top of objects using bright shades

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Originally Posted by WreX

shading looks random at some parts there are no shading or no visible shading would recommend not to use as dark lines inside the gun when the most of the colors of it is bright at some parts it just ruin your space where you need to shade it you have those lines that breaks the shading for the shading to make sense i can recommend to try show the top of objects using bright shades

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Why do you never use capitals and periods?

*sighs* oh isopix, oh isopix. That app is not bad for the basics, but God does it suck for graal related stuff. Its not you, its the app, I promise. I used to have it before, it hinders all your potential, it lacks many many features for the making of good pixel art. I strongly recommend switching to something better like adobe Photoshop or Gimp or ArtStudio for iOS.

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Don't forget to create a front and backside to make this an unofficial skin