Attachment 32302 Rate my taurus skin if any admin says it's good enough to be added to the game I will do the whole thing:D If it's not good enough please tell me what I shall do to improve it thanks:DAttachment 32304Attachment 32306Attachment 32307
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Attachment 32302 Rate my taurus skin if any admin says it's good enough to be added to the game I will do the whole thing:D If it's not good enough please tell me what I shall do to improve it thanks:DAttachment 32304Attachment 32306Attachment 32307
10/10 Hw should fire Bitzsam and make you the new gun admin
That’s actually cute. Admins need to release it and add pew pew sound to it
Thank you so much!! There's actually a second version I've forgotten to attach in case the muzzle feels too thick. Attachment 32303Attachment 32305
Not the best shading, but cute outline like imaginary said.
I'll try to fix the shading and make it better:D
I agree with Kenny that the shading is a bid off, but have you applied for the team yet?
With all due respect, I don't think he's ready for that yet. Give him time. (or her, dammit.)Quote:
Originally Posted by AliGamer911
I read the title as Treyarus Skin and I was expecting it to be minecraft. Whoops
But the gun's outline is so smooth though :cQuote:
Originally Posted by Kendrick
Honest mistake.Quote:
Originally Posted by Jp
Can ya'll stop being nice and just admit it's really not that good. Like don't sugarcoat it.
Yeah it can be harsh, but that's what criticism is about, if you wanna get good then you need to keep on practicing, study style, and try to replicate them. Learn how their shading works and such. Play with light sources.
Try and replicate this gun for example, or put your own twists on it, could even try to follow the lighting as a guide to your shading. Start with references first man, eventually you won't need them as much.
https://www.taurususa.com/images/ima...-513039_01.jpg
As for your lines, they look a bit jaggy, meaning they're not as smooth as you'd probably like them to be.
An example:
http://i.imgur.com/S2dbRxm.gif
So in other words, use the 1-2-3 step of ordering pixels instead of 1-3-1 and such, and try to make sure everything has a shape, like I noticed the trigger guard (thing around the trigger) is a single line. It would look better if it was at least 2-3 pixels wide.
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If you wanna learn some more, check out this site.
http://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299
But it is really cuteQuote:
Originally Posted by Tricky
I don't give cc's to guns. I don't know much about them, as in art-wise.
It applies to everything.Quote:
Originally Posted by Kendrick
y'know as i've always been mentioning in my posts i know that i suck. this was just an idea hoping that an admin would see it and fix the taurus gun since it's terrible cause even the bullet wasn't coming out of the muzzle. now i haven't ever been expecting any of my sketches to be implemented i've just been trying to give some ideas. i am not goot at gfx and haven't been expecting to hear/read good reviews. so yeaQuote:
Originally Posted by Tricky
now about the taurus gun. i've asked iMask to fix it and it's been fixed. the hallowed rifle skeleton skin has got the same problem yet):
and by the way the gun that i tried to draw was this one not the one you've shown to me:DAttachment 32322
thanks for the help i'll read the tips on the website and try to improve my crappy skills. i appreciate it!!<3
I know, I intended to get a different gun, although still similar to what you have.Quote:
Originally Posted by Anerafisher
If need be, I could edit your gun and show you how you could improve on it. It would have to be a .png file though.
I do not intend to hurt your feelings or anything of that sort, I'm just trying not to get your hopes up too high yet, since friends tend to be "too nice" sometimes, and when that person shows that piece of work, it won't look so great to others yet they were told by their friends that it was amazing.
you're right thank you i understand that:D none of these guys are my friends though. anyways i don't really mind if this skin is edited or not since i just want era to have better gun graphics and stuff (the current taurus skin seems crap to me to be honest) so yea:DQuote:
Originally Posted by Tricky
thanks again(:
yet there's another problem with the guns too there are guns which don't work properly as they should i mean some guns with useless muzzles since the bullets aren't coming off them i've tried to reach some developers with this issue but no one really cares about it):
It looks really weird.