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First sword ever pls feedback
Just a simple sword
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Attachment 28700
First sword ever pls feedback
Just a simple sword
I don't see anything.
I forgot to add image look againQuote:
Originally Posted by Kendrick
It's a weird shape. That's not what a blade looks like.
The shading is messed up, you're on the right track, but the lighting appears to be pillow shaded in a way; it's really contrasted.
Good job though
I like how you tried to make it appear rustic and used, however there is a lot that can be improved upon.
- The hilt itself isn't very appealing, try using a reference from here.
- The shading is flat, this isn't something you can immediately improve upon, but rather with practice and time.
- The handle is a little too short, look here for an example on how much you should extend it by.
- The blade itself also contains a lot of jaggies, refer to this post for some assistance in removing them and overall making your melee better shaded.
Solid effort though.
Good attempt at a first try.
Here's some tips.
-Reduce jaggies (Smooth-en your sword) and avoid over-outlining (thickening outline at some points)
-Fix the shading at the hilt to match the location of the light source
-Remember to AA some parts, to create a less jaggy appearance.
I can't think of any more but here's an edit I made (If you don't mind) so you can study off of it.
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Now, I'm not saying you should shade EXACTLY like me. But I'm just giving you a general idea.
Keep posting more.
i kinda think that the handle isnt short but thinQuote:
Originally Posted by Hex
Lol thanks guys I had no idea what I was doing I'll try making another sword.