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Aye,Sorry guys for other post...but heres my song.Please rate and comment tell me if you hear any stuff or just small mistakes i did so i can edit it and my b-day this thursday thanks for all the support.https://soundcloud.com/kriolegraalfx
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Yea,Go ahead and use SoundHound if you think this isnt legit because it is.
Not bad not bad.
Could really use some tuning for the first beat.
Would be easier if I use the same program as you.
Nice song xd
Thank-You Guys
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Tuning? What do you mean like a blend in the first beatQuote:
Originally Posted by XSTARX
It's quite hard to explain since I don't do music much in my life but I still understand the concept of it.
Basically what I meant was your first beat could be minimized in volume, right now it constantly goes all the way throughout the song with the same volume and speed.
Ahh,Okay i see what your saying ill work on it.Quote:
Originally Posted by XSTARX
That high pitch noise really hurts my ears.
Let's start of with what you did well. For a first song, this isn't that bad. I'm liking the violin 8th notes. Although, those harmonies can be fixed up a bit.
Now let's see what you can improve on. The melody feels lost beginning at 0:16. There is just too much going on that it's hard to keep track of the melody. You tried to have 2 melodies it seems, but it didn't work out too good. Have some sustained chords in there like a synth.
Good job and keep it up.
Ah,kay ill check it out and edit more ill post it when I'm finished
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Originally Posted by iMask