First Small Piece!

Inspired by iMask and others I decided to make a new walk in noise for Astros.
This is my first one so it's kinda bad.
http://https://soundcloud.com/oatheski/iera-retro-beat

Feedback?

goes from really quiet to really loud in a too short period of time. I don't feel the "retro" in this song, or the "Graal Era".

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Originally Posted by TrueGabipants

goes from really quiet to really loud in a too short period of time. I don't feel the "retro" in this song, or the "Graal Era".

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Astros. And I realized I put volume higher for the second layer ill change that later.

Its fine! Fine, in terms of great! Although It's a bit far from Astro's walk-in. Astros is more of electronic, energetic, and powerful. This short sound is more of chill beat. It could be used in another room at Astro! :D

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Originally Posted by Elfren Eve

Its fine! Fine, in terms of great! Although It's a bit far from Astro's walk-in. Astros is more of electronic, energetic, and powerful. This short sound is more of chill beat. It could be used in another room at Astro! :D

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Thanks :)

You used the same app as I did!! :o
http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...27301-So-bored!

I would suggest you to remove the piano or the background part. Add more beats. Keep it a mellow rhythm.

Nice beats.

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Originally Posted by WwW

Nice beats.

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Thanks.

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Originally Posted by Kendrick

You used the same app as I did!! :o
http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...27301-So-bored!

I would suggest you to remove the piano or the background part. Add more beats. Keep it a mellow rhythm.

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Haha. Yeah. After I saw your thread I thought about starting it easy. I searched but I decided to start with this lol.

I like it and all but it just goes from a short sound to this single beat over and over so You need to add more