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Quote: Originally Posted by hohi416 almost ............ It just .... Would've died if I had
Quote: Originally Posted by MJ4 It just .... Would've died if I had From laughing too hard?
Quote: Originally Posted by Kendrick I'm so confused, it could have been better. The reader has a misconception during the beginning of the story because it is being narrated, yet it isn't in full quotation marks. It could have been better. I know ;-; it's a short silly story