Moon's Levels

[Untilthemoonrises]

Hi I just recently got into leveling,p and thought I'd share them with the forums for some feedback on how to improve them! Thanks Ai for answering those questions I had!

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Lemme know what you think.

[Grandpa Illusions]

Awesome, you should be a level artist

[CluTch]

Dang! Really good! but will you have to buy it? your choice?

[Untilthemoonrises]

Awesome, you should be a level artist

Aww thank you for the awesome compliment. I am a artist just not a hired one :P I also was to inexperienced to even begin thinking about a responsibility at that level.

[CHAMPGRAAL]

Nice! Lucky my Era tile-set isn't working

[ShizGodsu]

Ok so I was reviewing your firs thouse and spotted a few things. Here's what I circled:

- There are a few house errors. You don't put small little window glass parts like you did (I circled). It makes it look too odd.
- the roof tiles on both west and east sides of the house have tile errors, could be easily fixed.
- Your road could have a sidewalk to make it seem more realistic, should also have a curve.
- The wooden plank things that go into the water seem bit odd. I'll check up on these.


It's a pretty creative house to me! Just a few tile errors that can be fixed. :P

All LAT really is, is to have a creative mind. The more creative the better, just gotta watch out for the tile errors :P

[Untilthemoonrises]

Ok so I was reviewing your firs thouse and spotted a few things. Here's what I circled:

- There are a few house errors. You don't put small little window glass parts like you did (I circled). It makes it look too odd.
- the roof tiles on both west and east sides of the house have tile errors, could be easily fixed.
- Your road could have a sidewalk to make it seem more realistic, should also have a curve.
- The wooden plank things that go into the water seem bit odd. I'll check up on these.


It's a pretty creative house to me! Just a few tile errors that can be fixed. :P

All LAT really is, is to have a creative mind. The more creative the better, just gotta watch out for the tile errors :P

I fixed those things thanks for catching them! The only thing is I couldn't seem to find a tile for the driveway, I don't think there is one I looked around era as well I didn't seem to find a tile that would fix that.

Revised house:
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[Jennifer Saphire]

Cool O:

[AngryNoob]

They look perfect.

[Untilthemoonrises]

Here's some more, and thanks for all the comments and tips!
I couldn't find a gate tile so I had to improvise a little bit.
Levels:
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