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    My first level!

    Hey,
    I have just installed the GraalEditor and I've been experimenting with it: this is the result
    Give me feedback on here please

    http://bit.ly/MyFirstLevel (Better Quality)
    MyFirstLevel.jpg

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    Trash Tier Noone's Avatar
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    *Like*

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    Big Cheese
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    It's nice, but mind if you add more stuff to the level? The building looks odd with the windows so low...
    Returned... I think. Lmao. I missed all of y'all <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by CluTch View Post
    It's nice, but mind if you add more stuff to the level? The building looks odd with the windows so low...
    Yeah, I'll keep working on it I'll post the result here, thanks for your feedback

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    Quote Originally Posted by Noone View Post
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    Thanks!

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    Emeth Baqash Cinos's Avatar
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    Can you tell me what you are making?



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    this is kinda empty

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    Street Boss Alex Damian's Avatar
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    It's great so far for a first level! I suggest adding some windows, and maybe some grass detail! Other than that, keep up the great work!
    Hello!

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    Damian is right, add more things but so far.. like it
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    Big Cheese ShizGodsu's Avatar
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    The building is insanely large for Era, assuming that it's for Era since you used it's tileset.

    Era's buildings are much smaller, so that the windows and doors look normal on it. Also, the stairs you made (assuming), are incorrect. Those are inside stairs, also the red line on them shouldnt repeat itself. Makes the stairs look weird.
    Roaming.

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