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Thread: 4th july firework sword submision

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    Lightbulb 4th july firework sword submision

    What do you guys think about my firework sword I've made.. Please feedback improvements and thoughts on it! Shading is better i believe on the forums it slightly shows it bad.
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    Make the firework a bit shorter and the handl logger? Other than that its awesome!

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    That's awesome
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    It's cool
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    Can't wait to see all of your Fourth of July graphics!
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    Looks nice, good job Chronicle
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    hm, amazing! make the firework smaller and it will do.

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    Heyheyhey, it's really neat, but I noticed you're using 100% black and white, don't use that! >.< Also you seem to be pillowshading, it might be okay on this weapon since it's a firework, and not really a sword in this case. It has good shape but I'm not too sure about the top piece so I made a little edit. Not sure if I even made it better since I'm a big noobie with gfx, but take it as a reference for the shape.

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    Also try to add more contrast to your colours, your colours are dark. o:
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    what tricky said xd ^^
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