2014 winter competition items

[Enfy]

I'm looking for strong criticism. Thanks 127641_orig copy.gif 4291701_orig copy.png 127641_orig.gif i don't know if i should continue this one.

[tahmaw]

Love them, maybe the guns could be a bit thinner? Also The melee looks amazing but looks very similar to rage blade.

[Mickayla]

Looks awesome . But I think the first gun should probably be a bit more shaped and shaded

[PublicSchool]

I can't see the gif, it says gif but no one shows xD

[Lafez]

First gun looks to plain!

[Hex]

I'm looking for strong criticism. Thanks 127641_orig copy.gif 4291701_orig copy.png 127641_orig.gif i don't know if i should continue this one.

Ok, first of all good job.
The first gun:
- too square around the edges
- hardly any visible shading
- jaggies on the hilt

The melee:
- try removing that yellow part, i have no idea what it is however i think it would look better without it.
- in the middle of the add texture similar to the ends
- add some lighter pixels on the ends to highlight the pointy parts of the ice

The other gun:
- far too straight and square
- shading needs alot of work
- random white straps at the front..? not sure what they are
- 2 hilts??

Overall not bad though, i can see you gradually improving keep it up!

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I can't see the gif, it says gif but no one shows xD

On era-go if a gif is over the required kb (19.5kb) it will not show.

[PublicSchool]

Ok, first of all good job.
The first gun:
- too square around the edges
- hardly any visible shading
- jaggies on the hilt

The melee:
- try removing that yellow part, i have no idea what it is however i think it would look better without it.
- in the middle of the add texture similar to the ends
- add some lighter pixels on the ends to highlight the pointy parts of the ice

The other gun:
- far too straight and square
- shading needs alot of work
- random white straps at the front..? not sure what they are
- 2 hilts??

Overall not bad though, i can see you gradually improving keep it up!

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On era-go if a gif is over the required kb (19.5kb) it will not show.

thanks!!! <3

[Johnyoungman224]

Ok, first of all good job.
The first gun:
- too square around the edges
- hardly any visible shading
- jaggies on the hilt

The melee:
- try removing that yellow part, i have no idea what it is however i think it would look better without it.
- in the middle of the add texture similar to the ends
- add some lighter pixels on the ends to highlight the pointy parts of the ice

The other gun:
- far too straight and square
- shading needs alot of work
- random white straps at the front..? not sure what they are
- 2 hilts??

Overall not bad though, i can see you gradually improving keep it up!

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On era-go if a gif is over the required kb (19.5kb) it will not show.

Both .gif Images are not over 19.5kb though. The first picture is 3.5kb and the second one is 3.3kb.

[Hex]

Both .gif Images are not over 19.5kb though. The first picture is 3.5kb and the second one is 3.3kb.

he probably just named it gif or he has yet to add it D:

[Johnyoungman224]

he probably just named it gif or he has yet to add it D:

You are probably right. I think he may have accidently saved it as a .gif on accident or is planning on turning it into one.

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