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    First Song I Made

    Aye,Sorry guys for other post...but heres my song.Please rate and comment tell me if you hear any stuff or just small mistakes i did so i can edit it and my b-day this thursday thanks for all the support.https://soundcloud.com/kriolegraalfx

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    Yea,Go ahead and use SoundHound if you think this isnt legit because it is.

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    Not bad not bad.

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    Could really use some tuning for the first beat.

    Would be easier if I use the same program as you.

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    Nice song xd

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    Thank-You Guys

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    Tuning? What do you mean like a blend in the first beat
    Quote Originally Posted by XSTARX View Post
    Could really use some tuning for the first beat.

    Would be easier if I use the same program as you.

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    It's quite hard to explain since I don't do music much in my life but I still understand the concept of it.

    Basically what I meant was your first beat could be minimized in volume, right now it constantly goes all the way throughout the song with the same volume and speed.

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    Ahh,Okay i see what your saying ill work on it.
    Quote Originally Posted by XSTARX View Post
    It's quite hard to explain since I don't do music much in my life but I still understand the concept of it.

    Basically what I meant was your first beat could be minimized in volume, right now it constantly goes all the way throughout the song with the same volume and speed.

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    That high pitch noise really hurts my ears.

    Let's start of with what you did well. For a first song, this isn't that bad. I'm liking the violin 8th notes. Although, those harmonies can be fixed up a bit.

    Now let's see what you can improve on. The melody feels lost beginning at 0:16. There is just too much going on that it's hard to keep track of the melody. You tried to have 2 melodies it seems, but it didn't work out too good. Have some sustained chords in there like a synth.

    Good job and keep it up.
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    Ah,kay ill check it out and edit more ill post it when I'm finished
    Quote Originally Posted by iMask View Post
    That high pitch noise really hurts my ears.

    Let's start of with what you did well. For a first song, this isn't that bad. I'm liking the violin 8th notes. Although, those harmonies can be fixed up a bit.

    Now let's see what you can improve on. The melody feels lost beginning at 0:16. There is just too much going on that it's hard to keep track of the melody. You tried to have 2 melodies it seems, but it didn't work out too good. Have some sustained chords in there like a synth.

    Good job and keep it up.

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