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    First Small Piece!

    Inspired by iMask and others I decided to make a new walk in noise for Astros.
    This is my first one so it's kinda bad.
    http://https://soundcloud.com/oatheski/iera-retro-beat

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    goes from really quiet to really loud in a too short period of time. I don't feel the "retro" in this song, or the "Graal Era".

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    Quote Originally Posted by TrueGabipants View Post
    goes from really quiet to really loud in a too short period of time. I don't feel the "retro" in this song, or the "Graal Era".
    Astros. And I realized I put volume higher for the second layer ill change that later.
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    Its fine! Fine, in terms of great! Although It's a bit far from Astro's walk-in. Astros is more of electronic, energetic, and powerful. This short sound is more of chill beat. It could be used in another room at Astro!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Elfren Eve View Post
    Its fine! Fine, in terms of great! Although It's a bit far from Astro's walk-in. Astros is more of electronic, energetic, and powerful. This short sound is more of chill beat. It could be used in another room at Astro!
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    You used the same app as I did!!
    http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...27301-So-bored!

    I would suggest you to remove the piano or the background part. Add more beats. Keep it a mellow rhythm.
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    Nice beats.

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    Quote Originally Posted by WwW View Post
    Nice beats.
    Thanks.


    Quote Originally Posted by Kendrick View Post
    You used the same app as I did!!
    http://www.era-go.com/forum/showthre...27301-So-bored!

    I would suggest you to remove the piano or the background part. Add more beats. Keep it a mellow rhythm.
    Haha. Yeah. After I saw your thread I thought about starting it easy. I searched but I decided to start with this lol.
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    I like it and all but it just goes from a short sound to this single beat over and over so You need to add more

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