Judith level thread :D

[Power5327]

Hello players!
I have been making levels for quite a while, I have already tried zone, classic and olwest tileset.
But now after I have trained myself on iEra tileset I thought I should share my work with you!
CC is appreciated.
PS: You can see my olwest levels by clicking the link in my signature.
First level: era_shop.PNG era_shop1.PNG
Second level: eralvl.PNG eralvl1.jpg
Third level: era_mansion.jpg
Fourth Level: era_mansion_inside.PNG era_mansion_inside1.PNG
Hope you like my levels. I'll be working on more and more soon to keep this thread updated.

[Victor]

Too many decorations xD
And the stair is weird

I like your sexy levels lol
awesomeeee

[Power5327]

Too many decorations xD
And the stair is weird

I like your sexy levels lol
awesomeeee

Sorry had to fill the empty spaces XD
About the stairs, ill find a less weird way to do them
Thank you

[Elfren Eve]

Quality levels. It'd be nice if you could do improve on your third level.
The front of the house house needs some fixing. Roof is shaped seems little abnormal.
Im talking about the tip of it. There are too many zig zag looking walls surrounding it. It would be better if it was cut down to 2 or 3 instead of 4.
Other then that. It's very neat! I like it.

[Power5327]

Quality levels. It'd be nice if you could do improve on your third level.
The front of the house house needs some fixing. Roof is shaped seems little abnormal.
Im talking about the tip of it. There are too many zig zag looking walls surrounding it. It would be better if it was cut down to 2 or 3 instead of 4.
Other then that. It's very neat! I like it.

Thanks for the feedback, outside levels took me a while to make tho, so I was sure there would be some errors or places to fix, I'll try to fix it asap. ty

[xcloudx97]

a fan of symmetrical things

[Power5327]

a fan of symmetrical things

well get ready to see more symmetrical things as soon as i get the chance to work on more

[John98]

Hello players!
I have been making levels for quite a while, I have already tried zone, classic and olwest tileset.
But now after I have trained myself on iEra tileset I thought I should share my work with you!
CC is appreciated.
PS: You can find my olwest levels in graalians forums too by clicking the link in my signature.
First level: era_shop.PNG era_shop1.PNG
Second level: eralvl.PNG eralvl1.jpg
Third level: era_mansion.jpg
Fourth Level: era_mansion_inside.PNG era_mansion_inside1.PNG
Hope you like my levels. I'll be working on more and more soon to keep this thread updated.

I like the level




First level:
era_shop.PNG
Picture#1-You can add Npc's and some pictures on that wall.
era_shop1.PNG
Picture#2-The Table with the vertical line, can be moved up on to the wall 1 block up.
http://gyazo.com/7616822b0052cb71fffdad7bf20d98c5
The tables on the bottom left, remove the bottom of it and just put the table top only.
http://gyazo.com/cfd84933ad85e4d4440e39f9012ec2d3
Repair table, horizontal line, close both endings like if that was a stair case or walk in, but just leave the Repair table
http://gyazo.com/2318d5b6bf3163d9625e99448fc08818

Second Level
eralvl1.jpg
Maybe fix this up a little? make it like a waiting room or remove it and make another level to it??
eralvl.PNG
Chair and table should be moved down more
Also play with the level more, make it unique, The level looks symmetrical a bit.


Third Level:
I think you should give it another try.

Fourth Level:
era_mansion_inside1.PNG

It was going so good, it's missing walls, the stair case should have walls

Example

http://gyazo.com/84895541cc447b427547cc7258a47dca

Bathroom needs to be it's own personal place with a door or in another level, also it does not really need a stair case to it, maybe a door would be nice.

[Zegshock]

Quality levels. It'd be nice if you could do improve on your third level.
The front of the house house needs some fixing. Roof is shaped seems little abnormal.
Im talking about the tip of it. There are too many zig zag looking walls surrounding it. It would be better if it was cut down to 2 or 3 instead of 4.
Other then that. It's very neat! I like it.

Just the tip....

[Power5327]

I like the level




First level:
era_shop.PNG
Picture#1-You can add Npc's and some pictures on that wall.
era_shop1.PNG
Picture#2-The Table with the vertical line, can be moved up on to the wall 1 block up.
http://gyazo.com/7616822b0052cb71fffdad7bf20d98c5
The tables on the bottom left, remove the bottom of it and just put the table top only.
http://gyazo.com/cfd84933ad85e4d4440e39f9012ec2d3
Repair table, horizontal line, close both endings like if that was a stair case or walk in, but just leave the Repair table
http://gyazo.com/2318d5b6bf3163d9625e99448fc08818

Second Level
eralvl1.jpg
Maybe fix this up a little? make it like a waiting room or remove it and make another level to it??
eralvl.PNG
Chair and table should be moved down more
Also play with the level more, make it unique, The level looks symmetrical a bit.


Third Level:
I think you should give it another try.

Fourth Level:
era_mansion_inside1.PNG

It was going so good, it's missing walls, the stair case should have walls

Example

http://gyazo.com/84895541cc447b427547cc7258a47dca

Bathroom needs to be it's own personal place with a door or in another level, also it does not really need a stair case to it, maybe a door would be nice.

Thanks john! Very helpful tips, I will fix them very soon, thanks

- - - Updated - - -

Just the tip....

outside come out really weird for me tho, i will keep practicing on them more, ty.

- - - Updated - - -

tried to remake my ugly outside level: http://gyazo.com/cba1d051c62d64093a43a9c3279f7750
also fixed the stair and bathroom problem: http://gyazo.com/ff61fbaa47dea23b0c51af8d543df24f (sort of)
and the shop: http://gyazo.com/60920d95644b4dfb78d64823ee1566a9
I'll fix others later