G4 Carbine by Soul

[Kendrick]

Bam! Kendrick here to ruin your life!!!
Fix the shading. Don't make the barrel that color of yellow, have it look a little more brown.. Make the Barrel look round with a shading of:
Dark
Lighter
Light
Lighter
Dark
Aiming point should be needed into this. How come the handle doesn't have light shade on the right side (left of the trigger)? Shading wouldn't make sense how you have it.

[Soul Graal]

Would it look better if it was all silver?

[Kendrick]

Would it look better if it was all silver?

I guess? Do if and show us. Don't forget silver isn't just gray. Have slighter other colours as light blue that looks like gray or dark light purple that looks gray.

[Soul Graal]

The yellow part on ammo barrel was supposed to represent bullets. I tried to base it off of this gunimages copy.jpg

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I didnt want to make it silver. Just a lightish grey color

[Kendrick]

The yellow part on ammo barrel was supposed to represent bullets. I tried to base it off of this gunimages copy.jpg

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I didnt want to make it silver. Just a lightish grey color

You don't always have to make it based off the picture, you know?

[Soul Graal]

Should I just make guns from imagination?

[Kendrick]

Should I just make guns from imagination?

That will be the best. I drew two guns from my imagination, but I suck at making guns.

[Soul Graal]

I don't think I can make anymore guns until I finish the last 2.

[Kendrick]

Last 2?

[Soul Graal]

Lotus Smg and Vault 54 Auto Rifle.
I don't want to finish the Thrylos because it looks like I just remodeled the metal storm.