Edith's Thread Of Graphics :D

[asaiki]

T-The croissant doesn't look nice and crispy anymore. ;-;

I made it leather, since I don't know what he's aiming for.

[b418smitten]

I made it leather, since I don't know what he's aiming for.

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Edith's not a guy, just clarifying.
Nice shading btw.

[Bacardi]

Thanks @asaiki for the CC o it looks really neat! Altho yes, as Kendrick said I was going for an actual croissant on a chair xD But thanks anyways for the really helpful tip on making leathery things ) I also changed the perspective a tad.

[Howl]

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So at this edit I just want to point out somethings, I don't know if you meant it the thing to be leather or cooked, I went with leather.

There are problems I spotted at your work, and you wil spot some problems at mine too.
- AA; The AA you did was excessive, meaning it was a lot of AA happening.
- Lineart; The lineart was a bit too thick, making the lineart shine more rather than the whole art itself.
- Color; I like the color but some parts of it seems a bit too dark for me, just a personal reference.
- Perspective; It looks like it was facing toward us, at down at the same time, or just facing toward us; made me dizzy, so I lowered the chair cushion a bit.
- Imagination; YOUR AMAZING AT IDEAS KISS ME.

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Original is better imo - just in terms of shading and the colour choice (except for the pillow. I don't think dithering isn't really suitable for this - clusters would probably be a better choice. Everything else is fine, I like the way you did the pillow. I do agree with the outlines being to thick and the AA being to excessive on the original though.

[Bacardi]

Noted, Thanks Howl

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Anyways, here's little coffee machine and a thermos

[Tricky]

I see improvement.

[b418smitten]

Its excellent, but the coffee machines in Australia usually have more space between the top and bottom, just something i grew up with, personal taste, besides that its amazing, I love your light sources.

[Power5327]

Damn man.. :0

[Bacardi]

Thanks Tricky, Biz, and Juju <3

[Bacardi]

Busy ;-;
ok so idk why but a lot of people seem to be drawing people o

Here's my first ever one :
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whatcha guys think?