Player Shop Pre-Upload Judgement

[Amazing Ace]

Hello all,

Before I submit my items to player shop, I would like to share it with others. Please give me constructive criticism for my work. I am willing to take any flak for my items. I want them to be as perfect as they can before I submit!


Of course, I imagine my shop to be a nice old antique-like setting with a lot of wooden texture.
Names are italicized, the item type is bold


The sign I will be using for the shop, nothing much but it is noticeable.


Anti-Tank Gun
Furniture: Similar to the World War Cannon at the World War Shop, only sleeker and not an artillery piece.


Casque Adrian
Hat: French helmet for the duration of WWI.


Combat Helmet- Dazzle
Hat: Standard Combat Helmet with Dazzle Camouflage. Popular camouflage during WWI and WWII.


Combat Helmet- Jungle
Hat: Standard Combat Helmet with Jungle Camouflage.


Combat Helmet- Marine
Hat: Standard Combat Helmet with Marine Camouflage.


Combat Helmet- Night
Hat: Standard Combat Helmet with Night Camouflage.


Combat Helmet- Urban
Hat: Standard Combat Helmet with Urban Camouflage.


Combat Helmet- Woodland
Hat: Standard Combat Helmet with Woodland Camouflage.


Model Tank Shelf
Furniture: Awesome shelf with model tanks! Includes, M1A1, M10, Pz IV, Pz II, T-34, M4A3, Mk VIII, and Sturpanzer A7V!


Rifle Rack
Furniture: Wooden rack with rifle holder. (If anyone says I stole/edited the gun, keep in mind that I was the one that made it!)


Soviet Tankers Helmet
Hat: Awesome Cold War style helmet.


Stahlhelm
Hat: German helmet for the duration of WWII.


Tank Ammunition
Furniture: Awesome tank ammunition of various types.


Tank Bed
Furniture: Renault FT with a bed. (I remember Kendrick helped me with shading, I used the one I made myself for this one though.)


Tank Portrait
Furniture: Moving portrait of a flying Sherman.


Tank Trophy
Furniture: Shiinnyy


Watchtower
Furniture: (hopefully) able to be climbable.


Hope you guys like them! Tell me what you think! Do you like the overall concept?

[ReyR]

Amazing job, Amazing Ace, and the watchtower tho, x.x

[Kendrick]

So creative but all of them need shading fixed.
Never put your huge signature in any furniture.
Never. Unless they are sprites.

Have the ammo look round, not flat. Fix your colours, too.

[Vuxxy]

No criticism from me, these are actually really good!

[Kendrick]

Stahlhelm Hat.

Too flat in the top. Smooth it out and have some shading in it. Fix those jaggies!

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All the camo hats need shading, too. Look at my army hat that I made a while back for a reference how you can fix your shading. =]

[Amazing Ace]

So creative but all of them need shading fixed.
Never put your huge signature in any furniture.
Never. Unless they are sprites.

Have the ammo look round, not flat. Fix your colours, too.

Awesome this is what I wanted to see. I didn't know about the signature part, thanks for saving me again mate! I'll see what I can do for shading as well.

[Daniiel]

It would look better with shading, work on that, but good job!

[Jou43]

Need more shading stahlhelm hat, ammo needs different colors too plain.
Everything else for me is good.

[olive6661]

Looks great Ace! Keep it up!

Also, here's *my* promotion...hehe

[Amazing Ace]

Haha awesome!