My first song

[D12*]

I had recently started to make some songs on Garageband, and I just made my first song!
https://soundcloud.com/user-874220547/my-first-song
Please give me some feedback to improve my song, i'm a beginner and i'll do the best to improve it.

[imoney a nub]

Lmao sounds funny HAHAHHAHAHHAHAHH tbh it's so cool but funny lol

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Action song basically what it sounds like

[D12*]

Lmao sounds funny HAHAHHAHAHHAHAHH tbh it's so cool but funny lol

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Action song basically what it sounds like

I don't know if I should feel offended or happy about the thing you said, but anyways thanks I guess..

[Greeze]

Groovy!