Soul's sounds

[Soul Graal]

Well, This is my very first song, not sure if this is the right section, just click this link
to see it.

https://soundcloud.com/user-895974363

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Via GarageBand

[Enfy]

It should have dubstep at the end, it would then be amazing.
Not bad for your first song

[Saint Revla]

Sounds good for a first song.

[Kendrick]

Remove the drum beat, pretty annoying, but I love it.. Make it more longer and have a climax, it is soo goood.

[Spolsh]

Pretty Good

[1Freddy1]

Better than skillrex haha

[Soul Graal]

Second sample is up! Check it out here: https://soundcloud.com/user-895974363/sample-2

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Also created using garageband <3

[Slapjack]

Not bad

[*Z.D The Great]

Remove the drum beat, pretty annoying, but I love it.. Make it more longer and have a climax, it is soo goood.

There is no drum beat thou..

[Sillygeo101]

There is no drum beat thou..

Yes there is, in the first sample in the end.