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    graal pro's level thread

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    the 2 are on classic tileset when the server i work for didnt have its own tileset.
    the last one is made on its own tile, atlantic tileset.

    please ratee

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    So many windows in the last one


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    They're cool.
    It looks very bland though, try detailing the grass perhaps?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Trav View Post
    They're cool.
    It looks very bland though, try detailing the grass perhaps?
    if youre talking about classic tile level, i wont because ill put my effort for nothing

    if youre about atlantic tile level, i will try to contact the gfx to make grass tiles, our tile is unfinished

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    Fences on the first two levels are a bid weird, experiment with them until something works.

    The last one needs a little work, specifically on the overuse of windows, the difference in wall width, and the general proportions.

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    the 2 are on atlantic tileset when i was a LAT there.
    era one is made on gonstruct because i dont have access to online editor

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    pls feedback

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    bump feed back please

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    Quote Originally Posted by Graal Pro View Post
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    the 2 are on atlantic tileset when i was a LAT there.
    era one is made on gonstruct because i dont have access to online editor

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    pls feedback

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    bump feed back please
    first one has weird fences and roofs. The wall borders are practically non-existent too.

    Last one uses bottom border tiles in the middle of the wall for some odd reason.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Graal Pro View Post

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    bump feed back please
    Great level
    I shall give feedback on this as it uses the era tileset and I suck with Classic.

    -Add lining to the Space at which the door will be placed.
    -At the bottom of your boardwalk, one overlaps the other....Needs fixing.
    -Add corners to the corners of your boardwalk.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bulletzone View Post
    Great level
    I shall give feedback on this as it uses the era tileset and I suck with Classic.

    -Add lining to the Space at which the door will be placed.
    -At the bottom of your boardwalk, one overlaps the other....Needs fixing.
    -Add corners to the corners of your boardwalk.
    Thank you Bulletzz
    Ill fix it as soon as possible

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    tried to make event house outside and inside, feedback please

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