My First Outside Levels

[Mr LebJoe S]

Really Nice =D

[Saint Revla]

Really Nice =D

Thanks Man!

[Mr LebJoe S]

=P I swear Rlly Nice --. It's 4:25 a.m. Idk about what I'm talking

[Saint Revla]

I appreciate the nice compliments I really do. However I hoped to receive consecutive criticism

I first started a thread on graalians a while ago and posted a few levels, unfortunately I was apparently the only leveler whoms thread didn't received criticism.

Be Honest
Don't Held back your words just say where it stands for
I guaranteed that I won't be mad and it helps me to improve.

[*Z.D The Great]

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These were made in no less then 15 minutes as part of a race.
(Expect this outside level to be poor quality)

Can I join your server and can you help me making levels?

[bf9]

Interesting portrayal of style and creative elements, that's great. However there are some perspective scale-wise errors which can be easily tackled. Nice work!! =)

[Slapjack]

Interesting portrayal of style and creative elements, that's great. However there are some perspective scale-wise errors which can be easily tackled. Nice work!! =)

You're back, now can you announce the YouTube contest winners?

[Power5327]

Here's some tips:
-Make the roofs the same size as the walls underneath it (no floating roofs)
-Use carpet designs carefully, using them randomly won't make you look professional. The purpose of carpets is to guide the players to the level.
-While filling the carpet outlines try using only one color and the darker tile of it (adding yellow tiles where there is red tiles is just not eye appealing)
-Try getting some examples from buildings in iEra or EraPc , some of the buildings you made got wrong perspective.

[Saint Revla]

Thanks

[Kendrick]

You're back, now can you announce the YouTube contest winners?

Don't derail. Go PM him.