Daimao's Levels

[Daimao]

Wow that's pretty good but you should add some of those lanterns.

Yeah I tried but the transparency was messed up with them so I couldn't

[N!chola$]

Yeah I tried but the transparency was messed up with them so I couldn't

oh ok, love it though

[Bulletzone]

Since CNY is approaching, here is a CNY inspired level ! Enjoy!

https://gyazo.com/6853509c9324452ee4ad45ad9fd690db

I understand what you said about keeping levels "linear", however I feel as if you can only apply that concept to Indoor levels. Outdoor levels are meant to be bursting with life and making something linear suppresses this in my opinion, so perhaps variate the placing of the tiles?

P.s: Perhaps add flowers to the level? Rather than keeping all the trees bundled up in one area perhaps spread them out a bit more?
Furthermore, if you're really going to have the Machines then add some mud shading underneath (I find it normally works well however my statement is more subjective).

Still an outstanding level

[Daimao]

I understand what you said about keeping levels "linear", however I feel as if you can only apply that concept to Indoor levels. Outdoor levels are meant to be bursting with life and making something linear suppresses this in my opinion, so perhaps variate the placing of the tiles?

P.s: Perhaps add flowers to the level? Rather than keeping all the trees bundled up in one area perhaps spread them out a bit more?
Furthermore, if you're really going to have the Machines then add some mud shading underneath (I find it normally works well however my statement is more subjective).

Still an outstanding level

I understand what you mean like bursting with life and use different tiles however the other tiles in the tileset I was using would not fit with the theme of the level, haha I already saw this comment coming! I didn't spread out the flower for a reason I wanted them to be like that and I lost a lot of my NPCs when I got this new PC which I stated in a earlier comment, and yes thank you for pointing out that error with the soda machines ahaha simple mistakes ! I wanted all those trees to be there as well I think the autumn color goes well with the theme, Thanks for the feed back!

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oh ok, love it though

Thank you !

[overlord]

i love it it but i thinks its not era style !!!

[Daimao]

i love it it but i thinks its not era style !!!

Thanks and I know what you mean the tile-set i'm using is outdated !

[BaileyVandenbroek]

Good.

Continue improving yourself.

[Daimao]

Good.

Continue improving yourself.

Thank you! I feel like I've improved a lot but you can never stop improving!

[Daimao]

Since for some reason Era-Go won't let me upload attachments, I have to use Gyazo links..So here ya go!

https://gyazo.com/c342fb72430c53cd58b2bf3fd46b32f3

https://gyazo.com/17c3a5aa5c210e12fdf2ae38ec023bf6

[N!chola$]

wow...