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    Distorted's Levels

    Criticism is welcomed. I'll be posting my levels on this thread

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    Up first, a mobster's bank vault:

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    Took me a moment to acknowledge the tiles belonging to Era.

    Honestly, I say to try again because I see it and it doesn't give me that sense of a vault from a mobster. (I do believe that mobs have their guns in the wall?)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kendrick View Post
    Took me a moment to acknowledge the tiles belonging to Era.

    Honestly, I say to try again because I see it and it doesn't give me that sense of a vault from a mobster. (I do believe that mobs have their guns in the wall?)
    yeah when I say criticism I meant constructive criticism, probably should've clarified that

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    what.. i thought u quit lol.

    looks alright, though a little cramped

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    Try to make the room less square cause it looks just plopped down with 0% effort or thought into why it was shaped that way. I get your trying to do the whole "gangster" theme here but some of the gfx doesnt really fit the same style, mabie make a house and have different rooms for each thing, and add a tad bit more spice to the walls. They are super plain
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