The End

[ItzTerry!]

its not fixed xD minigame. The only thing worse than racism is a racist who cant spell.

You didn't need to bold those characters.

[Kendrick]

You didn't really show the obvious in your story. 4/10.

Should of been more like;
"The wave came roaring, bouncing off the surface trying to grab me by the collar. I wasn't fully aware of the waves, but for the shovels that I was digging up from its body. The wave then grabbed me, dragging me ferociously towards its belly. My life was at risk, not knowing what to do, but only to call for help. "Help! Lifeguard!" I tried to shout, but "Please do not use rude words!" came out of my mouth instead. How is this possible? What sorcery is upon the word "lifeguard"? I haven't fully acknowledge its fact, but I kept trying again, having the same words release my mouth: "Please do not use rude words". Sweeping me closer to its belly, I gave up. Why would the system simply fail towards that word? What is the vulgarity in it? The ocean swallowed me whole, no me is left in this world. All I needed was a lifeguard, but...

*sigh*

A lifeg-

"Please do not use rude words!"

The end. "

[tristanfosho]

I probably fully read about 3 books in my entire life, grew up a hood rat, clowned my way through school, and decided not to go to college because I didn't know what I should pursue. Ill take that 4/10 with pride. Accomplishing something is better than nothing xD I would have never been able to write that, you make me feel like I should pursue further education. I only know how to work hard.

[Elfren Eve]

Honestly, I enjoyed it. There's little fancy things you can do here and there but good job.

[Nick Dynamics]

i dont get this =]