Procrastination-a poem

[Abbyx2]

Laziness ties a noose around my neck
"I can finish it! I say "I can finish it in a sec!"
But somehow those words don't match my actions
as I eat a burrito and forget about chemistry reactions

"I'll do it later" "I'll study tomorrow"
When tomorrow comes, the plans I made-I don't even follow
Instead I'm partying and trying to pretend
that I don't have any homework to do on this weekend

Curses, hatred, stress accompany my mind
when I have only one hour to create a poster about a stupid regression line
Eventually I finish it, finish it last minute
Filled with regret for not doing it in the first second

I'm a mess, I'm depressed, I should probably stop procrastinating
But there's a season premiere today that I've been longfully waiting
"I'll do it later" "I'll study tomorrow"
I say as the pile of work on my desk begins to overflow

[Tricky]

Love it, also the story of my life.

[Kamiroo Wolf]

Love it, also the story of my life.

I second this comment...

Should probably start my hw

[Star*]

Good resemblance.

[Joeyaudi1]

I like it, though can't you make the last words of each paragraph rhyme like you did with actions and reactions? Use "my friend" instead of just friends and replace "second" with something else ,tomorrow rhyme it with sorrow maybe?

[Dspong]

Why did you remind me!

[Pootis Heavy]

first sentence is relatable, but without the lazyness

[Abbyx2]

I like it, though can't you make the last words of each paragraph rhyme like you did with actions and reactions? Use "my friend" instead of just friends and replace "second" with something else ,tomorrow rhyme it with sorrow maybe?

I was going to use the word sorrow but I felt like the word seemed too deep for a poem about procrastination lol but I'll try to revise the poem with better rhyming. Thanks for the feedback

[RenoDorvay]

I like it a lot
My only criticism is that some of the stanzas feel too long

[Soojin]

wow, this is so me.