Very first pistol graphic

[JungleJimmy]

Don't judge me pls no negative comments just tips. It's not complete btw guys so yes it needs more detail.Attachment 29119

[Biblical]

More shading, as it doesn't look like theres a light source.
The bottom of the gun is way too big for the top, maybe thin it out a bit?
Thats all i have

[*Lex]

Ok, im gonna be blunt here, its shape is bad, its huge, and has no shading. But keep at it and you will get better

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[MarkGraal]

Fix those jaggies and round those corners, add a light source and some value.

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Ok, im gonna be blunt here, its shape is bad, its huge, and has no shading. But keep at it and you will get better

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perhaps giving some tips of advice will help him improve more than anything?

[JungleJimmy]

Guys! It's just the shape of the gun XD I haven't started on any of the detail! But I agree it looks weird. I'll fix it. How big should it be?

[helper of graal]

The gun looks like a part of the human body , i like it

[Q8JsSoOm]

men in black

[graal master]

make it a bit smaller so it does not look like a shotgun and add more shading,i can see this gun in graal online era

[Tricky]

Hey you should make a GFX thread to put all your graphics in, that way we won't have to run around trying to see all your art!

[ItzTerry!]

Fix the jaggies on the handle. That's about all I can say right now. Can't wait to see the shaded product.