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    A level i made.

    So i just finished making a level its like a road with a parking lot and part of a board walk and the idea is you would walk up the board walk and it would put you in a new level. I havent made the level for when the new level you get teleported into. This isnt suppose to be a certain type of level its just some practice. Its a little big so i had to take two screen shots. Feel free to tell me what you think and what i could of done better. Also this is my second level so dont expect something really nice.Screenshot (3).jpgScreenshot (4).jpg

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    This looks wonderful, keep it up.

    Have a nice day!

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    Nice job. Make a building now XD I don't level much so no tips sorry.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Frozenshadow View Post
    So i just finished making a level its like a road with a parking lot and part of a board walk and the idea is you would walk up the board walk and it would put you in a new level. I havent made the level for when the new level you get teleported into. This isnt suppose to be a certain type of level its just some practice. Its a little big so i had to take two screen shots. Feel free to tell me what you think and what i could of done better. Also this is my second level so dont expect something really nice.Screenshot (3).jpgScreenshot (4).jpg
    Awesome second level

    Comments on First image:
    -Add some NPC's once you pick up levelling.
    -Join the Yellow lines to a zebra crossing or something so it doesn't look like they lead to nowhere.

    Comments on Second image:
    -Some shading wouldn't hurt on the board walk tiles. (Not mandatory)
    -The stairs look flat. You need to add some sort of wall or the legs of the board walk. Take a look at the way the stairs are done in iera. Thereafter adapt that style into your designs.

    Hope to see more!
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    Okay i just changed the first level a little bit and made a second level. I hope you guys like it Screenshot (7).jpgScreenshot (5).jpgScreenshot (6).jpg

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    Quote Originally Posted by Frozenshadow View Post
    Okay i just changed the first level a little bit and made a second level. I hope you guys like it Screenshot (7).jpgScreenshot (5).jpgScreenshot (6).jpg
    Nice

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