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Thread: My levels!

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    My levels!

    screenshot.jpg

    Its my first level, Keep in mind that im a completely noob at leveling.

    screenshot2.jpg

    The level above is what i made in the same day

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    You have many errors, fix the corners


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    What you mean by corners? explain please.
    and thanks for the feedback

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    I'm playing a LoL game rn wait about 20-40 min and I'll explain.


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    first pic looks weird, why the balcony floor looks like roof tiles?
    second pic looks okay/normal

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    Quote Originally Posted by Esmeree View Post
    first pic looks weird, why the balcony floor looks like roof tiles?
    second pic looks okay/normal
    Lol its my first level so yeaah

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    Quote Originally Posted by Grand Theft Auto View Post
    Lol its my first level so yeaah
    I know
    I'm just giving my opinion about it

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    I tried to find as much errors as I can:

    https://imgur.com/a/MEnOX

    https://imgur.com/a/lA8Lx


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    The fence/border of the house on the first, top needs something to stand on. It's hard to explain.
    You've also used roof tiles as a ground tile for the flooring.

    The Japanese styled tiles also need something as a stand, rather than the wall just straight up.
    I'm trying my best to explain this, but it's pretty hard.

    I'll wait for @JoshGraal

    Also, I think those tiles are. About outdated. It feels like 2013 iEra.

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    My suggestion is, that after you finished your work, you can spend some time looking at it and if you see an error try to fix it.

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