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#1 will be putting in more swag.png #2 swag - Copy.png Num 3 THE RED BLOOD.png
Last edited by Theman; 01-21-2017 at 05:21 AM.
Looks good, but do you have the rest of the template?
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Oooh nice I like the side views.
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Perfect gas mask
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Thank you guys <3 I am also going to be making one with a strap that connects the mask to the back part.
love it!
Since Kendrick is a bit inactive and no one else is doing it, I'll have to give you some real feedback.
1. The gas mask is clearly an edit, and looks like every other gas mask out there. We want variety, not an added strap on your face.
2. There are jaggies. I see you're a bit of an inexperienced artist, but that's fine. Jaggies are are a group of pixels that somewhat destroy the flow of the line. It's also due to a lack of AA (Anti-Aliasing). You can fix it by making it a bit longer or shorter, so it doesn't make such a large 'jump'. I'm not the best at explaining, but you can check this tutorial out- http://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299
3. Colours are too dark. Sure, gas masks are supposed to be dark but it really looks boring. If you want it to stand out, add some colour and other nice vanities to it.
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