New gun: R-VN

[iMagicBae]

I was watching YT and i saw this gun and i loved it so i made my own version of it on graal.

Original:

Reference: https://youtu.be/iATr587JAXI
Description:
The R-VN Assault rifle is a burst fire rifle capable of splitting in half to turn into a melee dealing electrical stun shocks to your enemies. Although originally an energy burst fire gun the way i picture myself with this gun in graal its pretty much a mixture of metalstorm and m4 with a single shot per fire dealing 8 damage (9 while in perfect shape) and a 13 bullet clip with metal storm's firerate and m4's freeze, a medium reload and its quiet spready. When you switch to the melee the gun will split in half allowing you to deal 2 strong shocks dealing 10 dmg with a fairly long reload of the taser battery (two clip while in taser mode).

(I am yet to make the top view and the taser mode sprites.


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[JungleJimmy]

Awkward looking gun... But sure i'll take it why not. Also idk if this is a good observation, but the top and bottom look a little... bland. More detail maybe? Just an opinion.

[iMagicBae]

Awkward looking gun... But sure i'll take it why not. Also idk if this is a good observation, but the top and bottom look a little... bland. More detail maybe? Just an opinion.

Yeah, sure. Thanks, as i said there is some stuff im not done with


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[Grantman20]

That gun looks big idk

[iMagicBae]

That gun looks big idk

I resized the file so i could add it to tapatalk, here's a comparison of it against m4a3



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[Potato Graal]

I really like this gun idea, hope it's something they add it.


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[BiTzSam]

Too big. Your comparing a rifle with a silencer to an smg that has no stock. Half the rifle is on the body because of the handle location on the m4a3, as your handle is at the end of the gun that's where it's held from

[iMagicBae]

Too big. Your comparing a rifle with a silencer to an smg that has no stock. Half the rifle is on the body because of the handle location on the m4a3, as your handle is at the end of the gun that's where it's held from

Does that mean the problem is only with the image of the character wielding it and not with the gun's design?
If the problem is the design of the gun, is the problem the length (as in width only) or is it as you said too "big" (width and height)?
Also, the gun is meant to at some point be broken in half by the user, remember that, so if i were to make it smaller when it goes into melee mode each individual part of the now two-pieced gun would be too small.
Loving the feedback

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[iMagicBae]

Made this other gun. Its sloppy ik




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[Kriole]

Made this other gun. Its sloppy ik




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Now that is a dope looking gun, but you just need to add little bit more detail then your gun will be A1. And for the second R-VN you can see the clip is circlular and is interfering, the clip should be straight like in the picture.