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    Quote Originally Posted by SunAndMoon View Post
    Levels based off of era pc

    Quote Originally Posted by Trav View Post
    That cliff is way too linear.
    You also don't have much sand, its like grass, sand, then instantly water.
    The transition isn't really smooth.
    This.
    Joey hits the nail on the head.

    Quote Originally Posted by Joeyaudi1 View Post
    I think that sand transition is quite nice, as if you tend to break "leveling rules" which is a good thing for innovation, if you can manage to make it look more natural as in have part of the transition be directly from grass to water and other parts from grass to sand to water, that'll make it way cooler,as for that balcony thing I don't see a way to be able to go down to the beach, maybe add some stairs and some lights.
    A good tip for leveling is always to make natural things look random, but logical at the same time, look at Minecraft it's all random, yet it blends fine with each other.
    Words right out of my mouth.
    Your level is very good for you're first level?
    However, your Cliff's are tooo linear. You shouldn't necessarily make them random, but more cliffey?
    Example:

    The cliff's are not just straight right? They're constantly changing direction but that's what makes it awesome.
    Go crazy on the ground. Honestly, in my opinion the outside of the level carries at least 64% of the overall levels look. You can make an outstanding building, but if there's just plain grass then it masks the wonder of the level.

    In addition to what everyone else has said, your sand and water are behaving too linear. They don't follow a pattern.

    Quote Originally Posted by SunAndMoon View Post
    Tile set I was using only had one sand and it didn't match for some reason
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    My levels (SunAndMoon)

    I have been working at improving my leveling skills and decided to make a small project for a pointless building in era, hope you like it and would love feedback. (I didn't have very many npc's to work with and would like to know how to get more)

    What it is based off of:



    My remake:





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    WOW!!!

    That looks so good, holy crap.
    Ask me anything and ill try my best to answer

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    Quote Originally Posted by N!chola$ View Post
    WOW!!!

    That looks so good, holy crap.
    Thank you, I appreciate it.

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    That does look nice but maybe a bit big from outside

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    ^^^

    Nice but the expad of the Exterior building is too big the garage can be hit the Event House
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    Good leveling! Keep on improving, I like it though.
    Question? Need help? Feel free to message me anytime

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    This needs to be added tbh...

    This building has needed an update for a while.


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    Quote Originally Posted by NCX View Post
    ^^^

    Nice but the expad of the Exterior building is too big the garage can be hit the Event House
    Thought you were Froz for a second...
    Ask me anything and ill try my best to answer

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    Quote Originally Posted by N!chola$ View Post
    Thought you were Froz for a second...
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