My levels (SunAndMoon)

[N!chola$]

Lmao.. Hahaha..

You had his old profile picture...then the next second you change it to a person that looks like marg...

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You had his old profile picture...then the next second you change it to a person that looks like marg...

Beacuse i steal there Avatar in vb5 forum haha..

[Untilthemoonrises]

Wow you are improving very quickly! Hats off to you

[MiniMustache]

That's nice and they should bring back staff birthday hats!

[Bulletzone]

I have been working at improving my leveling skills and decided to make a small project for a pointless building in era, hope you like it and would love feedback. (I didn't have very many npc's to work with and would like to know how to get more)

What it is based off of:



My remake:

​Bulletzone is Impressed.

Exterior Level:
Line your doors and the windows for a much better effect rather than them looking like they've been glued there. Perhaps add a window?

Second Level:
I really love the style of this level, but perhaps to make the floor look better, perhaps you could add some darker shading (darker brown tiles) along the walls and stuff. Don't change the style as it's very nice.

Third level:
Floor's a bit meh in my opinion you can do way better.



For your second and Third level One main attention I'd like to draw your attention to is the windows. Notice how the wall tile comes out and comes in, It's pretty hard to stick a window on-top of those tiles as it ruins the perspective, Look at how Interior levels do such thing for windows, You can use those tiles but when it comes to adding a window you need to make a slight change to the tiles used then resume.
Ask if you're not clear on anything.

Awesome Improvement! Keep it up!

[SunAndMoon]

​Bulletzone is Impressed.

Exterior Level:
Line your doors and the windows for a much better effect rather than them looking like they've been glued there. Perhaps add a window?

Second Level:
I really love the style of this level, but perhaps to make the floor look better, perhaps you could add some darker shading (darker brown tiles) along the walls and stuff. Don't change the style as it's very nice.

Third level:
Floor's a bit meh in my opinion you can do way better.



For your second and Third level One main attention I'd like to draw your attention to is the windows. Notice how the wall tile comes out and comes in, It's pretty hard to stick a window on-top of those tiles as it ruins the perspective, Look at how Interior levels do such thing for windows, You can use those tiles but when it comes to adding a window you need to make a slight change to the tiles used then resume.
Ask if you're not clear on anything.

Awesome Improvement! Keep it up!

Thank u I appreciate the feedback, will work on all of those things

[SunAndMoon]

I would have added more npc's if I had more. Let me know what you think of this.

[Abdullah1441]

Nice!!!!!!


That is awesome

[SunAndMoon]

Nice!!!!!!


That is awesome

Thank you, I appreciate it

[N!chola$]

I think you should add some 'shading' from the dock to the water. Showing that its above the water and not floating on top of it.