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[Abdullah1441]

The two stories are about fighting depression... Does depression bother you that much, Zany?

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Don't do it Zany, he's trying to lure you in so he can pounce on you like cats do to their prey.

But I'm a Maine Coon... So asking her to put a Maine Coon in the story is like saying "Put me in the story"!






Plus, my cat breed as been known to fight depression and the stories are about fighting depression... So... Add me?

[Zany]

The two stories are about fighting depression... Does depression bother you that much, Zany?

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But I'm a Maine Coon... So asking her to put a Maine Coon in the story is like saying "Put me in the story"!






Plus, my cat breed as been known to fight depression and the stories are about fighting depression... So... Add me?

It's not two separate stories, it's one, just the prologue and a small chunk of the first chapter, which I'm still editing and adding to on the Docs. I'm not sure if I'll continue posting on here just because it makes me anxious (don't ask, just me, I do like the constructive criticism as it makes me a better writer). But, I'm getting help with that, I'm doing okay, I wanted to write something that still had that point of view so it was better understood as to how it really feels.

[GTA Tetris]

It's not two separate stories, it's one, just the prologue and a small chunk of the first chapter, which I'm still editing and adding to on the Docs. I'm not sure if I'll continue posting on here just because it makes me anxious (don't ask, just me, I do like the constructive criticism as it makes me a better writer). But, I'm getting help with that, I'm doing okay, I wanted to write something that still had that point of view so it was better understood as to how it really feels.

You are doing great. Writing helps express emotions and I love writing.

[Abdullah1441]

[Zany]

Lmao, this is something semi-personal I had an idea to write about for a very long time, I have a plan for it, and I only added part of it on here for opinions, so I'd rather not add you in, but thanks.
I wanna know how many memes you have about me on your computer..

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You are doing great. Writing helps express emotions and I love writing.

Thank you, I appreciate it.

[Xiang IV]

If you wanted to get more in-depth feedback, you could share the document with me, and I could highlight/comment on parts. That is, of course, only if you are willing.

[Zany]

If you wanted to get more in-depth feedback, you could share the document with me, and I could highlight/comment on parts. That is, of course, only if you are willing.

All the information and advice you gave me in game was put at the top of my document in note form, as reminder to do what you told me and look over my work continuously for common grammatical mistakes, and I definitely appreciate all that you told me because it's definitely improved my written skills; I'm not editing it on here nonetheless.

[N!chola$]

Lmao, this is something semi-personal I had an idea to write about for a very long time, I have a plan for it, and I only added part of it on here for opinions, so I'd rather not add you in, but thanks.
I wanna know how many memes you have about me on your computer..

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Thank you, I appreciate it.

I bet he's making one right now...

[Abdullah1441]

I shifted in my bed and felt something hard underneath my leg. I pushed my arm under the covers, messing them up along the way, and retrieved what ended up being a book. One I’ve been reading for weeks, but couldn’t focus enough to read. I’ve had to read each sentence 3 times over, and since reading makes me tired, I only finish one page a night. I wanted to go to sleep though, so I guess one more page wouldn’t hurt. I’ll leave a dent in the book tonight, I thought sarcastically. I took off my glasses, took my wavy brown hair out of its bun and let it fall uncomfortably on my neck, it standing up a bit from being on top of my head so long, and went on my side to read my book.

Wait... You were sleeping with your glasses on?

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Lmao, this is something semi-personal I had an idea to write about for a very long time, I have a plan for it, and I only added part of it on here for opinions, so I'd rather not add you in, but thanks.
I wanna know how many memes you have about me on your computer..

None


(I have a picture of Marg so I make the Margadosh memes)

[N!chola$]

oh my lord, this man screen shots peoples profiles...

*Deletes account*

jk hehehehehehehehe